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Reviewed By: val gal :) On: July 07, 2003 16:44 CDT Comment/Review: Please, please, PLEASE update soon! i really want to read what happens next.thanx!!!!
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Reviewed By: val gal :) On: July 04, 2003 01:01 CDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: kewl!!!!! i love the story so far, please update soon! poor ryou, oh well, you said it would get better for him later, right. that makes it easier to read the rape sceens.
can't wait for the next chappie! thanx! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: bakurasmistress aka ashley On: June 20, 2003 23:03 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: please update soon! this fic was really great, discriptive and exciting in only its first chapter. now im hooked on another one of your stories you evil mind-controlling writer!lol^__^
also, i think this new twist between ryou and marik is very enlightening and not to mention kawaii&sexy!anyway keep up the great work! ja ne |
Reviewed By: Catsy & Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2003 19:51 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: OMG!This is so good! I am like... literally hooked. So discriptive and intimidating, shocking, and exciting all in one chappie! how do ya' do it?
Write more pwetty pleaz. Update soon, and keep up the oh so FABULOUSE (did I spell that right?) Ficcie. Laterz. |
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