| "The last road taken" Reviews/Comments [ 17 ] |
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Reviewed By: cleo23 On: June 11, 2004 15:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pleeassseeee write another chap. this story is gettin interestin!!!!
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Title: Keep it going
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2004 12:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Since this is Sesshomaru/Kagome fic, keep it going. Need to see how you bring the two together. Update soon. Good start to the fic.
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Reviewed By: demonic tenshii On: April 09, 2004 22:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
u better continue this sounds good, really good! and if its a sess/kag im all for it being completed!!!!!
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Reviewed By: demonic tenshii On: April 09, 2004 22:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
u better continue this sounds good, really good! and if its a sess/kag im all for it being completed!!!!!
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Reviewed By: lillithan On: August 20, 2003 15:31 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So far so good. You should continue with this, it does have the potential on being a really good fic. I noticed your first chapter seemed a bit condensed, so on the following try to strech things out. It makes a story flow better and helps the reader grap onto the theme, mood, and plot of the story a lot better.
Just some pointers that im sure you already knew ^.^ your writing is already really good, but every little bit helps ne?
Anyway, please continue
Lil |
Reviewed By: Stephanie On: August 19, 2003 12:03 CDT
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I think u should continue. Its a story that needs to be finished. Whats going to happen to kagome, and how does sesshomaru enter the picture..... Thiose are just some questions wheeling in my head.... |
Reviewed By: SSWW On: July 08, 2003 17:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just like and I want more!! keeping going its great!!^_^ |
Reviewed By: moongoddet On: July 07, 2003 07:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
START WRITING GODDAMT THIS STORY IS TOOOOOOO GOOD. |
Reviewed By: Ashleigh On: July 06, 2003 03:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is really good so far. I've only seen about 1 or 2 stories that have Inuyasha and Shippou die (how sad) in it. Hopefully you continue the story, I can't wait to find out how she copes with everything. |
Reviewed By: Weebo On: June 24, 2003 16:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
I'll update in a couple days. I've been caught up in The Harry Potter series and haven't really been doing anything else lately. Hehe.. Anyway I'll start writing tonite and if I finish then I finish. I am also looking for a beta reader to help me a long and give me ideas.
((I'll repost this on my next chapter))
-Weebo
BTW - Thanks for deciding to go on with your Fanfic raven39. Everyone should read any of her stuff. Its really really good. |
Reviewed By: Yura On: June 24, 2003 10:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update soon! It's really wort to continue! I just luv SESS/KAG!!!! YAY!!
Please update soon!
JA ne!
Yura |
Reviewed By: Ayam On: June 23, 2003 10:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HELL YEAH YOU SHOULD CONTINUE!!!!! That was a perfect beginning! PLEASE>>> CONTINUE! |
Reviewed By: Egg Devil On: June 21, 2003 17:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just wanted to repeat all of the other reviews and say please please PLEASE continue!!! It's great so far! |
Reviewed By: Nikko On: June 20, 2003 07:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
Please continue |
Reviewed By: Sai-chan On: June 19, 2003 22:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
hell yes you should continue! This is a great start to what should be an even greater story. Like pixie queen said fluffy(sess)/Kagome all the way! XD |
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