| "Bitch" Reviews/Comments [ 19 ] |
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Reviewed By: Devil1 On: October 03, 2003 22:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent, the chapters were very good. Congratulations. Will be more of your writings? I hope.
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Reviewed By: coolmorphs On: October 03, 2003 00:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A anb B
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Reviewed By: thene On: July 18, 2003 21:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
That last chapter was really good and hot. ^^ |
Reviewed By: Duo no Baka On: July 16, 2003 19:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Duo No Baka: *giggles*
Baka Yarou : *Wipes drool of face* that was great
don't you agree, Duo-san?
Duo No Baka: * giggling continues *
Baka Barou : don't mind her she's hopeless, and reading you fic again, we both loved it, right?
just nod your head.
Duo No Baka: *nods and giggles*
Baka Yarou: hopeless!! |
Reviewed By: IcaBob On: July 13, 2003 03:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
All I can say is "WOW!!!" |
Reviewed By: pollodelicioso On: July 11, 2003 22:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
Damn!!! I never knew you could practically get horny from ready a FAN-FIC!!! Man, I must've read that 4th chapter like 3 times in a row (my favorite part is when Heero is being tortured with the dildo by Duo, hee, hee!)!! That was one of the most amazing yaoi encounters i have ever read, and that's truly saying someting!
PLEASE keep up the GREAT work, and update REAL SOOOOOOOON!!! |
Reviewed By: janey On: July 11, 2003 19:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
damn that was some horny shit. more more more more more more |
Reviewed By: Danes With Fyre [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2003 17:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was rich! I liked this alot, defiently had quite a few giggles from this!! Heero is a big tease. ^_^ I must say, I cannot wait to see the next chapter, and what Heero has in store for his beloved Duo. ^_^ Keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: Neko911 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2003 15:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
::licks lips 1 more time:: that was great! although i was wondering y the whole thing was jumbled up in2 a huge paragraph... does ur "Enter" key not work? oh well, it was still another great chapter ^_^ PLEASE write more? |
Reviewed By: Kaili On: July 03, 2003 23:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
Yeah, a sequel would be good. I'd like to see all the Gundam Pilots in school uniforms. |
Reviewed By: wren_legacy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2003 15:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oooo... how is Heero going to get Duo back? Can't wait to find out! It should be good. ^_~ |
Reviewed By: Neko911 On: June 30, 2003 15:07 CDT
Comment/Review:
this is GREAT! so, ::licks lips:: when does the next chapter come out? ^_~ |
Reviewed By: Lady Bum On: June 24, 2003 21:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hey, I'm so happy your posting this story here too. I first read it on ff.net and I LOVE IT. Please update soon!! |
Reviewed By: IcaBob On: June 21, 2003 01:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HEHE!!! Heero is the bitch. I like that! It's great so far, please do continue soon.
Love & Peace |
Reviewed By: Lita Starwind [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2003 16:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
this is definitly different,continue this soon! Can't wait till you update this! |
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