| "To Trust Again (rewritten)" Reviews/Comments [ 33 ] |
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Reviewed By: such a sad sad story On: February 07, 2004 19:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a very, very sad story. For one, you must live a very sheltered life because nothing is all sunshines and daisies. sure, Usagi got raped and we all know that must be a terrible thing to experience, but for her to be able to get over it so quickly? i don't think so. Also, Draco's character is way off and no where near to where he should really be. Your perception of reality seems really small. There's no depth in this story, its just fluff--a way to get Draco and Usagi together--and not a good one at that.
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Reviewed By: Henio [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2004 09:51 CST
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make the Lort fic a legolasseresna fic Plzzzzzzz
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Reviewed By: Henio [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2004 09:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! IT'S AWSOME. PLLZZZZZZZZZZZ UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Queen_Arwen [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2003 15:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fanfic! Please get another chapter out soon! And about your idea for a LotR and SM crossover, I think it's a wonderful idea. If you do one, can you please make it a Legolas/Serena fic?Please?Please?Please?
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Reviewed By: A New Hottness [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2003 21:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a sad,sad fic. I felt so sorry for Usagi. I'm sorry but that was so wrong of you, she was a vigin too.God that must of hurt.It's sort of original but terrible. I don't mean to be harsh but don't write anymore stories like this one. You could at least had someone save her at least.Personally I think you can do something better. Keep writing though don't give up because of me. :) (I based this rating on the first chapter so I am sort of judging a book by it's cover.But I was so disgusted I didn't want to read anymore.Sorry for that.)
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Reviewed By: pudge On: July 30, 2003 22:35 CDT
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nice lil elf i give it a 7 |
Reviewed By: StarGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2003 18:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's really good keep writing.I love the story! |
Reviewed By: usagi_tsukino15 On: July 28, 2003 16:31 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved it it just needs to be finished |
Reviewed By: Anemos15 On: July 16, 2003 09:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have alot of good details in this and I enjoyed reading it. I am an author and you deserve a rating beyond 10. This is a great story. Keep up the good work. I certainly like this story alot and give you alot of encouragement on continueing what your writing. Who says authors can't like Anime? ^_~ Good luck!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Keep updating!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: PixieDW On: July 11, 2003 19:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your fan/fic!!XDD
Its very good!!
I'm really enjoying it!!
**Please note that your fan/fic
is really making me really sick inside..
cause I have this thing for Draco and Tom Felton(the guy who plays draco)But Just to let every one know** HE IS MINE!!XDDD
SO NO TOUCHIE!!!XDD
thanx for listing**^^' |
Reviewed By: cece On: July 07, 2003 14:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
waiii!!! i still luv it!!! er... keep updating!!! its good!!! |
Reviewed By: Usarei Shintomoe On: July 06, 2003 18:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"silver" Hell yes integrate the other Senshi! |
Reviewed By: Serenacutie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2003 13:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great fanfiction. It's very original!!! |
Reviewed By: KittyKat On: July 01, 2003 14:59 CDT
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I think this was really good...YOU NEED TO WRITE MORE!!!!!! Keep adding on please and I would like to say one more thing. DON'T STOP WRITING!!! |
Reviewed By: cece On: June 27, 2003 18:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
waiiii!!! i luv it!!!! ish... anyways, i have a thing i wanna say. in the beginning of chap 5... in the authors note... wwaiiiiiiii!! phedre!!!! you read kushiel's dart??? waiii!! i love that book!!!!! ...yeah... i'm baka... lol!!! great story!!! |
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