| "To Trust Again (rewritten)" Reviews/Comments [ 33 ] |
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Reviewed By: cehavard90 On: May 09, 2006 18:39 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
really great fic. please update soon!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Moon Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2006 17:17 CDT
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DAMN THAT MAMORU. I THOUGHT THAT WAS REALLY BAD BUT I THINK YOU SHOULD CONTINUE ON WITH THE STORY. CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE CHAPTERS.
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Title: To Trust Again (Rewritten)
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2006 22:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: Moon Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2006 11:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE CONTINUE!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Tenshi Taiyono [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2005 23:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story, hope to seee some more.
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Reviewed By: greebo45 On: July 08, 2005 13:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this fic it is very good but slightly boring but that might just be because its the begining once it gets going it will be excellent keep writing im enjoying it so far keep it up
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Reviewed By: Solar Angel On: April 26, 2005 11:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good story. I really like it keep going.
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Reviewed By: DragonOfDarkness [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2005 16:34 CST
Comment/Review:
Nice fic! I just have one small complaint and that is that Dobby the house elf's eyes are actually green. (It's pretty clear in the books.) As a little side suggestion, and maybe you were already planning to do this, you could hook Ron and/or Malfoy up with one of the other senshi like if they come to see Usagi. (they should, i mean they are SWORN to protect her arent they?) Update soon!
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Reviewed By: darkprincessselene [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2004 15:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like your fanfic, but you are horrible for that cliffhanger! Please write more, and soon!! Love and Light, Ann usagi_2901@yahoo.com
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Reviewed By: Lonely_Destiny [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2004 22:56 CDT
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update soon!
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Reviewed By: Ariane Adora [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2004 23:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought it was great, and extremely interesting. I was reading the summary and was like, "A... Harry Potter... Sailor Moon... crossover..." But I was pleasantly surprised with your fic. And it seems like it has improved a lot with the rewriting, so kudos to you for realizing your mistakes and fixing them. I didn't read your fic before the rewrite, so you may have made it work, but I think the Harry/Usagi pairing would work a lot better than a Draco/Usagi as well, and I can't wait to read more!
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Reviewed By: Serena SilverMoon On: July 06, 2004 20:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it, I feel sorry for Serena. Please get the next chapter out soon, I can't wait to read more. SMILE ^_~
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Reviewed By: such a sad sad story On: February 07, 2004 19:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a very, very sad story. For one, you must live a very sheltered life because nothing is all sunshines and daisies. sure, Usagi got raped and we all know that must be a terrible thing to experience, but for her to be able to get over it so quickly? i don't think so. Also, Draco's character is way off and no where near to where he should really be. Your perception of reality seems really small. There's no depth in this story, its just fluff--a way to get Draco and Usagi together--and not a good one at that.
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Reviewed By: Henio [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2004 09:51 CST
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make the Lort fic a legolasseresna fic Plzzzzzzz
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Reviewed By: Henio [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2004 09:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! IT'S AWSOME. PLLZZZZZZZZZZZ UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!
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