| "Spirit of the Moon" Reviews/Comments [ 54 ] |
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Reviewed By: ceciliaa_e@msn.com On: July 07, 2003 23:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well yes you rushed allot of it. but I like the idea its good. this is the first Review I give on this site so ill just say it simply I love it all. keep it up just take it little slower that's all. |
Reviewed By: Demoness of the Dark [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2003 15:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You've certainy written yourself a very good story and I do not think that you are rushing things. Keep writing and update soon! |
Reviewed By: Jam On: July 04, 2003 22:12 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG, she's going 2 B A mom, I am sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
looking forward 2 this!!!! |
Reviewed By: sesshyangel On: July 03, 2003 09:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
IT's fine. some stories can't work when it is rushed, but I think this is fine. It keeps things...interesting. It's merely moving at a fast pace!
IY doesn't seem very upset w/ KAg mating w/ his hated elder brother, and he seem to have accepted that fact that's she's pregnant very easily |
Reviewed By: Sesshyangel On: July 03, 2003 09:30 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know,it would have been more interesting if you didn't tell us that that was a fake flashback? But I guess, unlike most authors, you value your neck. LOL |
Reviewed By: Inuheart On: July 03, 2003 01:19 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the whole twisted and kind of never really gonna happen on tv idea of Kagome having Fluffy's baby. Surprised Inuyasha is taking it so well. I love it. Kepp on writing! |
Reviewed By: Lady Sesshoumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2003 21:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
Poor Kagome! Poor everyone, actually...hehe I'm quite curious to see what will become of her relationship with Sesshoumaru. I know the lies are necessary, but it will take a serious toll on her emotions involving him. I think it will be hard for her to go through such hurt only to find out it was not true, even though he has valid reasons for doing this. |
Reviewed By: kityasha [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2003 18:42 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that is so sad **cries** but good |
Reviewed By: Sesshoumaru's Mistress [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2003 16:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a really good fic. its kinda similar to otehr fics ive read but still very good & very enjoyable... its different in its own way. I can't wait to find out wut happens next so update soon! |
Reviewed By: Meru Kayru [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2003 14:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
OMG! I want more! This story is so good! I can't wait to find out what happens next! |
Reviewed By: Weebo On: June 24, 2003 14:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
BWHAHAHAHAHHA. I love it. Please continue on - This story has made my cmputer's favorites XD
[[BTW - Its way better then I can write - I like you you maintained Inuyasha's character while giving us another point of view on Sesshoumaru's. Bravo man. Bravo.]]
-Weebo Killerkiwi2@hotmail.com |
Reviewed By: Meef Monster On: June 23, 2003 21:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
Definatly cool...look foward to readin more ! |
Reviewed By: Sai-chan On: June 23, 2003 17:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
muhaha! i love this fic! it's coolies! u have to update soon! ^______^
Purple |
Reviewed By: Fluffysgirl4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2003 14:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THAT WAS REALLY GOOD! I loved it, it was uniqe from everything else that I have read. ^_^ Please update soon! |
Reviewed By: DarkBulma On: June 23, 2003 09:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey another great chapter! Can't wait for more!!! Please update soon! I wonder where Sesshomaru took Inuyasha? Also what about Kagome's dream? Oh well. Everything will be explained in due time I suspose. Well update soon I want to know what happen's. Later ~^_-*~DB~ |
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