| "Baby sitting Demons" Reviews/Comments [ 87 ] |
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Reviewed By: lolgirl On: September 11, 2003 19:45 CDT
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this is SOOOOOO super cute! that's greatest idea EVAH!i can't wait for more chapters |
Reviewed By: ice queen On: September 10, 2003 19:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOU HAVE GOT TO WRITE MORE! IT'S A GREAT FIC, IT'S SOOO FUNNY PLEASE KEEP WRITING IT! |
Reviewed By: Zdawg [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2003 10:44 CDT
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hey, this is a wonderful fic!!! ur english is getting better! it doesn't even seem like u hav problems with english, okay enough of that, i luv all ur fics, they're great!!!
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Reviewed By: hiei's girl On: September 03, 2003 18:07 CDT
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Keep writting I can't wait 2 c what happends nex |
Reviewed By: Sessy luver On: September 03, 2003 18:02 CDT
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Keep going I'm waiting for more chapters. |
Reviewed By: Inu Yasha X Kagome On: September 03, 2003 14:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked you fanfic. It was REALLY good. Update soon! :) Inu Yasha X Kagome |
Reviewed By: Navy Torakat On: September 01, 2003 03:22 CDT
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I LOVE IT KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK! |
Reviewed By: Chyna On: September 01, 2003 03:17 CDT
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Please keep writting I love it. Can't wait for more! |
Reviewed By: phona On: September 01, 2003 03:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it I just finished reading all the chapters that U've written so far and I can't wait for more! |
Reviewed By: StormAZ On: August 22, 2003 01:19 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This has got to be one of the cutest and funniest fics I've read to date!
The spelling/grammar errors you made ... so what? You still convey the meaning you want and it works just fine. I absolutely love how cute you've got the kitsune and the firebaby.
Please don't let anyone discourage you from your writing. I think you do an excellent job! |
Reviewed By: Red Youko On: August 19, 2003 16:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story was SO adorible! Please hurry and finish the story. I can't wait. A little Hiei and Kurama is so kawaii!!! |
Reviewed By: ShadowsLight [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2003 14:51 CDT
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That is so cute, I hope Hiei-chan gets better soon real soon, so Kurama-chan and Hiei-chan can play! Update soon plz! |
Reviewed By: village idiot [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2003 09:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have read other fanfics and this one is enjoyable. Cant wait till its finished! I suggest less of the surch of the potion maker and moor outakes with the 2 little cute ones.
~Kitty~ |
Reviewed By: Ally Hearts On: August 02, 2003 19:57 CDT
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Yay!!! I'm finished, but you HAVE to write more its sooooo cute, Hiei kissed Kurama ^-^. plz plz write more soon!!! |
Reviewed By: Ally Hearts On: August 02, 2003 16:29 CDT
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Your english is no problem. From what I've read is pretty good, and you shouldn't tell yourself other wise. I love this fic so far(i'm not finished):P Aww it sound sooo cute, Hiei and Kurama little kids.XD N E wayz its really good ^-^ |
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