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Reviewed By: super_JM [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2003 14:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
another good story. so I didn't review when this one frist came out. I wasn't at home for two weeks. I was in W.D wit h my family.
But really this is a really good story. Ka nods. "Interesting. very interesting story" Ka whispers.
can't wait for the next chapter |
Reviewed By: Ishida Takeru On: July 09, 2003 02:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeh, I really thing they should be aged a bit more. But, thats just me personally. The theme you have with them and how they deal with it...make them seem at least 13-ish. And biologically speaking it works better. :: usually skips on the age thing and just pictures them older anyway :: ^_^ Good fic though. |
Reviewed By: .......... On: July 08, 2003 16:54 CDT
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I had a friend named Noa that moved a while ago. I always wondered about him and now i now. @.@ |
Reviewed By: Seto's Chic On: July 02, 2003 19:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's an awesome fic. And i like the way you update so frequently. Keep up the good work! And um...just an idea...maybe Seto/Noa? Incest I know but when you think about it their not blood related. ^_^ Update soon! |
Reviewed By: Blah Blah The Terrible On: July 02, 2003 12:19 CDT
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KILL GOZABURO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Silver Reflection On: July 01, 2003 23:16 CDT
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*pretendinfg to be statue of Liberty... u know holding a book and a torch? * Yes i'm crazy.... don't mind me...
NO!!! CLIFFY!!1*CRIES* |
Reviewed By: xakuryoux On: July 01, 2003 12:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
er....i think i waz suppose 2 do dis a couple of days ago but i forgot, gomen, i juz waz busy w/stuff, er....gud story tho comfusing at sum point. myabe ish juz me iono.
n e way er...c ya Junshin |
Reviewed By: BakurasAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2003 11:06 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Tis awesome KK and I can't wait for more. If you ever need Kanji just ask me he'd love to be in the story.
Kanji- Yeah I guess as long as Gozaburi-baka doesn't chase me around. * a strange dragon sits on his shoulder as a heart shaped pendant shimmers around his neck* Oh and this is my friend Sei, he's really cool. The dragon transforms into a yami with light blue hair and smiles. |
Reviewed By: Silver Reflection On: June 29, 2003 21:39 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I love it!!!! U gotta write more! Thy're definately better than mine. XD Noa's cute when he's liek that.... i remember seeing a piccy of him and a puppy somewhere........ somewhere.. i dont' remember... >< Can't wait till the next chapter! one suggestion, u know theyr'e rich, why not a private jet? |
Reviewed By: Me of Me On: June 28, 2003 02:07 CDT
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>=( THAT BASTARD!!!! Someone needs to kill Gozaburo!!! |
Reviewed By: Blah Blah The Terrible On: June 26, 2003 15:41 CDT
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BAH!!!! *wants to kill Gozabaka for slapping Seto* He's such a mean stinky baka who needs to jump out of a window!!! ...Oh wait, he does. >O;;;
So, is he going to die soon? *hopes so, because I loathe Gozaburo for what he did to Seto in the comic. (He chained him to a desk and made him study non-stop! The bastard...* |
Reviewed By: Blah Blah The Terrible On: June 26, 2003 15:40 CDT
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BAH!!!! *wants to kill Gozabaka for slapping Seto* He's such a mean stinky baka who needs to jump out of a window!!! ...Oh wait, he does. > |
Reviewed By: super_JM [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2003 19:47 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
die Gozaburo. stupid man. being so mean. blow him up. oop now you don't have know more bad guy. oh well
great chapter. can't wait for more. I well I like this story |
Reviewed By: Blah Blah The Terrible On: June 25, 2003 23:18 CDT
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Noa calls Gozabaka 'Chichiue', which means 'Papa'. (Sorry, I don't like Gozaburo, he's a stiny meanie old guy.)
Awww... Noa's cute here! And he's not all cuckoo either. YAY!! |
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