| "Are You Crazy?" Reviews/Comments [ 23 ] |
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Reviewed By: InuyashaxGurl On: July 20, 2003 21:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think you are really good. Please hurry and continue the story, I really want to know what happens. |
Reviewed By: Loki On: July 20, 2003 14:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought your story was really creative. I enjoyed reading it and can't wait for more! I suggest making the capters longer but it isn't really too neccessary. Please continue! |
Reviewed By: tsuchi- thorn On: July 15, 2003 23:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
personallity 1) that is a really good first chapter.
personallity 2) need next chapter. |
Reviewed By: kilala On: July 07, 2003 21:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
i dont think it was bad ithink u should write more |
Reviewed By: Lum On: June 27, 2003 17:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
The story is a very origianl idea. The writing seems to be a little bit lacking, though. It was still enjoyable. And I hopw you put the next chapter up. |
Reviewed By: Kitten On: July 19, 2003 13:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
i really like this fic i hope you update soon! but in the 2nd chapter the writing was HUGE! it was really annoying and hard to read so i'd appreciate itif you could write normally. please dont take this as an offence or anything cuz this is a great story. |
Reviewed By: Sango-chan On: July 19, 2003 13:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the creativity of the story. It was quite enjoyable to read. I'm looking foward to reading the next chapter!!! Keep up the good work!!!!! |
Reviewed By: AngelOfDiamonds On: July 19, 2003 16:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
I don't think it's boring. I like it. Please continue and update soon. I'll be waiting. |
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