| "Demon of the forest" Reviews/Comments [ 45 ] |
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Title: Continue!!!
Reviewed By: IcaBob On: November 02, 2003 12:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Duo should be nicer to Heero if he wants him to return the feelings...other than lust. heh... I love the story so far, you must continue soon, e-mail me the next time you update. @ txangel918@aol.com I would be very gratful. ^_^ Love & Peace
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Reviewed By: Eirwen Lai [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2003 11:44 CST
Comment/Review:
Yay! I love this fic. Update soon please! The 2x1 and yaoi rocks! Yay! Keep up the good work! Eirwen Lai
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Reviewed By: Dragon Slayer1 On: October 31, 2003 20:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
God I love this story please contiune I want more lemons this stuff is great contiune contiune contiune contiune. More more more. Please contiune.
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Title: Great
Reviewed By: Haibara3 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2003 17:34 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great fic write more. Please! pretty please! Get up and type damn you! LOVE the 2x1.
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Reviewed By: lothlaide On: September 25, 2003 17:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is...one of the oddest fics I've ever read. but I sure ain't complaining about all that yummy 2x1 hentai!
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Reviewed By: Crescent [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 1969 18:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Is this story you orginal idea because I have read a story by pheonix at Gundam Wing addition, and it is basically the same conscept with vines and all only different in storyline. It dosn't matter tough cuz I LOVE the fic and the lemon was not superfulous it was HOT. Now you have to continue cuz vines cannot compare to Duo and I think He-chan agress too. HURRY AND CONTINUE. |
Reviewed By: Grevola On: August 21, 2003 20:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Though the grammar dropped off toward the end, this fic was undeniably sexy, and I liked it.
I'd love to see some of your other lemons posted.
Grevola |
Reviewed By: IcaBob On: July 25, 2003 00:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOU MUST CONTINUE SOON!!! ^_^ *dies* |
Reviewed By: bishoonenlover On: July 22, 2003 01:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
God this was good.I get tired of alway's reading Heero and Duo stories but this was waaaaaay good I'm glad I didn't over look it. |
Reviewed By: nekoi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2003 18:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
Duo time to play ooooh I want to see more of this story |
Reviewed By: Purple Mist On: July 17, 2003 02:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Mmmm, my favorite kink without the need of rape. THANK YOU!! Take a bow, baby!! Something about my favorite bishounens at the mercy of vines or tenticles and enjoying themselves...*Grins* Because there are so many 2x1 or 1x2 lemons, it's hard to find one that really gets me all hot and bothered so take a another bow, baby!! Write more, soon? Pretty please? |
Reviewed By: Akennea On: July 16, 2003 16:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's a really good fic, please continue writing |
Reviewed By: jules On: July 16, 2003 14:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
its a little derivative in style,but some of the ideas in it are nice and disturbing :)
i loved it |
Reviewed By: pollodelicioso On: July 16, 2003 01:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
Nah, this fic had just the right amount of lemon, so don't you worry! I really love your story, it's leaning a little to the strange side (what with that freaky vine and all) but that's alright, it still sounds good to a yaoi-yearning person like me!
Keep up the good work, update SoOn!
...and you say your other fics have more lemon? I must read them too... |
Reviewed By: Ahu On: July 12, 2003 14:43 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 3 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
OH ! You're stoppin just like that?!Noo it's one of the best, and you can't stop! |
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