| "Demon of the forest" Reviews/Comments [ 45 ] |
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Reviewed By: Ita-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2003 07:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AAAAiiiiiyyyyyaaahhhhhhh,...*pout,pout*...you stop Thhhheeeerrrreeeee????....*pout*....this fic is Gooooooodddd,....and never mine about the grammar/spellings,...at least yours is much better than mine,...all in all,..this 2x1 fic is Grrrrreeeeeaattttttttt,...*hugs*...continue soon kay,...and keep-up the good work,...till next chapter,...[make it soon]...Jaaaaaaaaaaa and Gaaaaaaannnbbaatteeeeeeeeee-Neeeee!!^.~!! |
Reviewed By: ^_^ On: June 26, 2003 04:17 CDT
Comment/Review:
wow...talking plants....oh well i think that this fic is going to be good just please update soon i want to know whats going to happen.
^_^ and i agree with yaoi angel 2x1 rules |
Reviewed By: Yaoi Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2003 02:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmm, I do I say this. I LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!! You have to write the next chapter soon! PLEASE update quickly! I just love 2X1!
2X1 RULES!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Cat On: June 25, 2003 18:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
Please write more. This is great. Wish there was more. And who cares about grammar if the story is good and understandable, who gives a hoot. And I can understand this and its great. Please continue soon. Please write more 2x1. THere the best but not many write them. |
Reviewed By: nekoi On: June 25, 2003 17:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
OOoooooooooooooooooooooooooooohhh nice really really nice want more of this story poor hee-chan his all tie...uuummmm a tie up heero uuummm lots of possibility fo Duo. go for it Duo |
Reviewed By: PreventerPixie On: June 25, 2003 15:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
interesting...i love 2x1! please continue })i({ |
Reviewed By: Fallen On: June 25, 2003 13:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
Yay! Another person who loves 2x1!! This fic looks like it has plenty of yummy potential; I hope you will continue working on it. |
Reviewed By: Lita Starwind [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2003 23:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
who gives a crap about the grammer? as long as it's understandable!(plus my grammer sucks) This is really interesting so far! I wanna know what happens next! ok i think we know what happens next but that's beside the point. Continue this really soon! Can't wait till you update this! Hope it's soon...i think i just said that...o well...u get the point. Till you continue |
Reviewed By: Angry Blood Sister On: July 15, 2003 13:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ya, the grammar and proper tenses need to be looked over again, but other than that it is quite good. I've seen some fics that are more explicit than this of Fanfiction, so I don't see why you don't post the rest there as well. No one really cares as long as it's rated to the upmost degree and warnings are set in place. hehe
Again, very good. I like the idea of the dual-entity demon being one person really. It's quite interesting, and the fact that they feed off of pleasure is fun. lol *me and my sick mind*
Please, do continue. =D
~T.L |
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