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| "Demon of the forest" Reviews/Comments [ 45 ] | | Pages (3): [ « < 1 2 3 ] | Reviewed By: Fallen On: June 25, 2003 13:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
Yay! Another person who loves 2x1!! This fic looks like it has plenty of yummy potential; I hope you will continue working on it. | Reviewed By: Lita Starwind [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2003 23:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
who gives a crap about the grammer? as long as it's understandable!(plus my grammer sucks) This is really interesting so far! I wanna know what happens next! ok i think we know what happens next but that's beside the point. Continue this really soon! Can't wait till you update this! Hope it's soon...i think i just said that...o well...u get the point. Till you continue | Reviewed By: Angry Blood Sister On: July 15, 2003 13:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ya, the grammar and proper tenses need to be looked over again, but other than that it is quite good. I've seen some fics that are more explicit than this of Fanfiction, so I don't see why you don't post the rest there as well. No one really cares as long as it's rated to the upmost degree and warnings are set in place. hehe
Again, very good. I like the idea of the dual-entity demon being one person really. It's quite interesting, and the fact that they feed off of pleasure is fun. lol *me and my sick mind*
Please, do continue. =D
~T.L | | Pages (3): [ « < 1 2 3 ] |
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