| "Da Luau: Where anything happens!" Reviews/Comments [ 24 ] |
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Reviewed By: Dustyfey [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2003 14:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
it gets a little hard to understandwho is talking at times bu other thatn that it is a really funny fic. please keep writing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Sailor Dark [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2003 12:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
I am the number one Kurama fan and have a piece of his hair to prove it that I found in his trash. I looooooooovvvvvveeeeee yoooooooooouuuuuu Kurama!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Andy On: June 30, 2003 22:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a great story you have to continue this fiction. I can't wait to see what is happening in the poker room. |
Reviewed By: Andy On: June 30, 2003 22:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was really great. You have to continue this fiction. I just can't wait to read more. |
Reviewed By: Ookami On: June 30, 2003 02:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think you are doing a good job of writing this fic and you have done a much better job of spelling than most fanfic authors do. It is a very original piece and I find it very amusing! Please...continue writing this fic...i am looking forward to what happened with strip poker and some of my favorite characters not yet mentioned! |
Reviewed By: Starry Eyes On: June 29, 2003 23:41 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update soon! |
Reviewed By: sessieluv2 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2003 23:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is a great fanfic keep writing please!!! |
Reviewed By: sessieluv2 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2003 23:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is a great fanfic keep writing please!!! |
Reviewed By: Sailor Dark [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2003 20:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
Heeeeeeey! If Kurama is not doing anything can I have him? I loooooove this fic please write more do it for your fan! |
Reviewed By: EarthDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2003 19:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ryefa:oky now that was funny just plain funny please yu gotta rite some more!!!!!!!!
inuyasha: don't sound so desperate
Ryefa: shut up i don't sound desperate!
Sano: Yes you do
Ryefa: Who asked you![sticks out tongue] |
Reviewed By: angelbulma1 On: June 29, 2003 18:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Funny! please write more! |
Reviewed By: Inferno_66 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2003 17:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
Okay, if u guys ain't gonna read this, I ain't gonna write this. I mean, it's actually a great fic, (So far) *shakes head* NEwayz!!! Please read it. . . It's not fair for some of you that read it, but if I get only two reviews, I won't finish the story. I've done a bit of editing. . . So I hope it's better. Bye fanfic writers and readers alike!! |
Reviewed By: super_skippy On: June 28, 2003 21:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
this is some funny ass shit. keep it coming. i ask one thing no yaoi please. or yuri |
Reviewed By: Youko Kurana On: June 30, 2003 11:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg i can't stop laughing. You are awesome!!!!! I love your comedy fici can't stop laughing |
Reviewed By: catarllsasami On: June 25, 2003 21:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Totally awsome dude you have to write more.
Sano: ESpecially more truth or dares
Sango:Shut up You idiot!!!*blushes*
CS: Both of you Shut Up it's my review
Write MORE!!! |
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