| "Sweet Liar" Reviews/Comments [ 23 ] |
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Reviewed By: chibi meow On: July 08, 2004 18:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
it's happy, i like it, just waiting for an update ;)
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Title: AAAAWESOMME
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2004 23:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome story. Love the way you have written it. Can't wait to see what happens next. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Toki Mirage [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2003 08:06 CST
Comment/Review:
NOOOOO!!!!!!! *slow motion* IT ENDED!!!! NO!!!! dude. what a nasty cliff hanger. *glares playfully* hehhehheh
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Reviewed By: T. Ali On: November 17, 2003 21:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
good job! i enjoyed the fic a lot. but i personally like rough Sessy fics, but this one was good.
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Reviewed By: lil_sesshi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2003 14:33 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update soon
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Reviewed By: Vedelle [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2003 21:44 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
write more i love it !!!!!! please!!!
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Reviewed By: sessheen2000 On: July 27, 2003 05:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was a great story and you are ONE HELL OF A WRITER and i am eager to read more. :D ja ne |
Reviewed By: sessieluv2 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2003 02:28 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this fanfic.When you wrote the only lemon here is with Sesshy,Kag that is okay with me,I personal do not want to know the sex life of Inuyasha and a clay pot..lol!!!! |
Reviewed By: Ðäñtè [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2003 16:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
brilliant!i love it!its amaing!god,i havent seen alot of inuyasha episodes but this is amazingly amazing!hm,a few errors but we all make them!!your a brilliant writer and hopefully might become an author someday ;),like i wanna become one too!hehe,anyway,your writing style and everything is amazing!i have no complaints and millions of compliments! |
Reviewed By: Inferno_66 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2003 23:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, you do have a few errors, but nothing ya can't fix. Feel free to ask me if you want to know. ANYWAYS!! This is actually a great fic, but I feel it's missing an ENDING. This kind of lacks finality. This seems like. . .a sequel kind of thing, ya know? (Well, first you could kinda explain how Kagome's mother and brother react to this.) The sequel should be about Kagome's kids. Rin& Shippo, and the ones she's carrying. If possible, ad somemore kids in there. Maybe you could make an 'Inuyasha Forgiven' chappie where he apologizes and becomes excepted into the family, and they all live happily- with a continuance! Ya know? Anyways, if you want to know what I'm talking about, feel free to E-mail me, and please, read my story! It's called DA LUAU: WHERE ANYTHING HAPPENS! Inuyasha frenz are in it. And I'd like your opinions too. You're a bright author.Okay den, I hope you finish the fic, or make a sequel! This is GREAT work! |
Reviewed By: jubyo [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2003 19:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great story!!!! PLease update soon!!~
What do u mean by sing crystal? DOes that mean that she can sing to the crystal and It will do something powerful? |
Reviewed By: jubyo [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2003 19:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great story!!!! PLease update soon!!~ |
Reviewed By: kaoru On: June 26, 2003 15:07 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I loooooooove this fic
please udapte sooooooon |
Reviewed By: PyRo_hottie2004 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2003 11:28 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's a great fic!! Sessomaru is a little out of charecter, but I loved it! Update!!! :) Hehehe... like Anne McCaffrey, don't we?
:~:PyRo |
Reviewed By: MeefMonster On: June 26, 2003 01:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoohooo *waves her Seshy/Kagome Flag* go fluffy go fluffy!! I love it girlfirend!! keep on writing~~@@!(btw i'm guessing you've read Anne McCaffrey's Crystal singer..thats where ya got the idea for the other race eh?????) |
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