| "Unexpected Allies I: How to Train a Taiyoukai" Reviews/Comments [ 111 ] |
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Reviewed By: Sesshoumaruboi On: July 16, 2003 21:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The story is really good. There better be more, I am getting really excited to read what happens. You should keep on writing stories cause I think you have a gift to write fanfics and who knows, u could be a famous fanfic writer. Well i guess that is it for now. And please continue writing this story me and other people want to know what happens next. Bye. |
Reviewed By: Inuma Sancton On: July 09, 2003 00:19 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please post and or finish chap 13 i am really injoying your story |
Reviewed By: kagomesirene [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2003 14:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
I love this chapter and can`t wait to read more so update soon!
I wanna know what Sesshou is going to do and what`s happening to Kag!
Ja ne
* kagomesirene*
Beside there are many many many very good Sess/Kag stories out there, but they`re almost all on ffn.et!
I dunno why but it seems that the most Sess/Kag-fans/authors publish their stories on ff.net and the Inu/Kag`s are on MM.org?WHY???
Well I made a list on my website(list is not complete yet),but if you want to, look out for "fanstuff" on my page(it`s a german side so you`ll don`t understand much more beside this list)! |
Reviewed By: MoonBunny14 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2003 19:20 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Go KAGOME! YAEH!! Continue and update fast!!! This story is great!! Hope you update soon!! I cant wait till the next chapter (chapter(s) perferably)!! I luv this story!! UPDATE ASAP! :) |
Reviewed By: kagomesirene [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2003 17:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wow as I flip through ff.net and MM.org searching for your story I`m suddenly utterly surprised!
One moment I´m so very happy that chapter 10 is out on ff.net , start my review ,and the next moment I spot the next chapters already on MM.org!Well what to say?!That happens if you`re to lazy and forget to read your schedule! Here is my rewiew for chapter 10 cause I had no time to go on reading till now!
What a great chapter!
So Kagome is now under Sesshous protecting! YAY!
It starts to get more serious between the two!
I wonder what Inuyasha is going to say when he finds out about Sesshou´s “claim”(even if it`s just a claim to protect her nothing more so far!!)!
I`m sure he would be really shocked ,should they encounter some youkai which refuse to fight them because of Kag! HAHA I can almost see his stunned face!
By the way isn`t Inu able to sense Sess on Kagome ,he merged his magic to her blood after all, or does it just function when she wears the headband?
Yay that`s going to be fun!
Inuyasha won`t have much fun with Kagome from now on! Finally she had the strength to stand up against him and to give him a piece of her mind! Well Kag sure shocked him almost to death as she told him she can do what she wants to do(especially the part with finding Sesshou and screw him ‘till the cows come home!That was more than great! Actually I almost laughed my ass off after the first shock of course!
I have to say that I completely forgot that Kag didn`t free Sesshou from the necklace ,too! I wonder if she`s actually willing to free him?! It might be useful in the future(haha! Subduing poor Sesshou whenever she wants, but no she won`t do that to him, after all he`s not acting without thinking like some other hotheaded hanyou! )
Can`t wait to read the next chapter and what`s going on with this ominous new sword!
!
Ja ne
* kagomesirene * |
Reviewed By: kagomesirene [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2003 17:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wow as I flip through ff.net and MM.org searching for your story I`m suddenly utterly surprised!
One moment I´m so very happy that chapter 10 is out on ff.net , start my review ,and the next moment I spot the next chapters already on MM.org!Well what to say?!That happens if you`re to lazy and forget to read your schedule! Here is my rewiew for chapter 10 cause I had no time to go on reading till now!
What a great chapter!
So Kagome is now under Sesshous protecting! YAY!
It starts to get more serious between the two!
I wonder what Inuyasha is going to say when he finds out about Sesshou´s “claim”(even if it`s just a claim to protect her nothing more so far!!)!
I`m sure he would be really shocked ,should they encounter some youkai which refuse to fight them because of Kag! HAHA I can almost see his stunned face!
By the way isn`t Inu able to sense Sess on Kagome ,he merged his magic to her blood after all, or does it just function when she wears the headband?
Yay that`s going to be fun!
Inuyasha won`t have much fun with Kagome from now on! Finally she had the strength to stand up against him and to give him a piece of her mind! Well Kag sure shocked him almost to death as she told him she can do what she wants to do(especially the part with finding Sesshou and screw him ‘till the cows come home!That was more than great! Actually I almost laughed my ass off after the first shock of course!
I have to say that I completely forgot that Kag didn`t free Sesshou from the necklace ,too! I wonder if she`s actually willing to free him?! It might be useful in the future(haha! Subduing poor Sesshou whenever she wants, but no she won`t do that to him, after all he`s not acting without thinking like some other hotheaded hanyou! )
Can`t wait to read the next chapter and what`s going on with this ominous new sword!
!
Ja ne
* kagomesirene * |
Reviewed By: jessica On: July 07, 2003 14:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i think you would do great at anything you write. I hope you update really soon. |
Reviewed By: Anonymous On: July 07, 2003 13:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
Love it! Update! Now, dont get me into my threatning side...>>;; |
Reviewed By: Me.. On: July 07, 2003 08:12 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
CAN I ASK SOMETHING???? WHY IS IT THAT YOU ALREADY HAVE CHAPPIES 11 AND 12 HERE WHILE U ONLY HAD CHAPPIE 10 AT FFNET???? IS THE FFNET DATABASE ACTING FREAKY AGAIN AND WON'T LET YOU UPLOAD OR SOMETHIN????
POOR DOGS THOUGH....SIT & DOWN.....hmm...... |
Reviewed By: Sesshyangel On: July 07, 2003 08:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
...that's it?
If it wasn't the 4th of july weekend I would be very pissed!
But hey at least it was an update! you've finally updated right. LOL. I love the new kago. Give both iy and Kikyot (That's her original name for those of you that don't know) what they deserve. and Kagome what she deserves! 0SESSHY Goodness!
That preview sounds very interesting. Try not to drive me nuts here waiting for it. Please? See I know how to be polite. Now you have to return the courtesy and update real quick! LOL |
Reviewed By: Lilfrozenfire [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2003 01:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
Gee. I feel so special. *wipes tear* -LFF
Get a life. -RS
Thank you for your reviews. And hurry with your updates! They are great. It's great. I love your ideas. They are a mixture between old ideas and highly original ones. -LFF
I can't wait for you to update either. -DW
That's a true compliment considering she has her moments of being a stuck-up snob. Well...*looks at clock* I have to get to bed. 2 in the morning is way too late for me. Oh...one more thing. It's a good idea keeping Sesshoumaru away from the whiskey. *shudders at her imagination running wild* Byez. -LFF |
Reviewed By: sailormoonmarisa [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2003 20:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought it was verrrrrrrrrrrrrrryyyyyyyyyyy Fuuuuunnnnnnnnnyyyyyyyyy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! yet some parts were very sad. |
Reviewed By: Xing Xing Tomodachi On: July 03, 2003 07:17 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I love your pairings Sess/Kag.
I have been waiting for this everywhere I go, and found it here.
Please continue your wonderful story.
I love the part where Kag forgets (or did she)about Sess's Down necklace.
I also love the way she talks to Inu.
I hope in your upcomming next chapters Kag will down Sess or at least say 'SIT DOWN, BOYS'when both are there.
Love your fic is all. ^___^ |
Reviewed By: Anonymous On: July 02, 2003 21:17 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful! It is one of the greatest fic I've ever read! Keep up the good job! ^___^ |
Reviewed By: jessica On: July 02, 2003 19:16 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my god! oh please update this story. i have that i really enjoy your story. this is the 3rd time i've readed this story. I love the pairings of sesshomaru and kagome. are ou planing on add a lime or lemon to this story. I really think that kikyo and kagome should have it out. Plus I would love to read how you would write it. please update really soon. |
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