"Toy Series" Reviews/Comments [ 19 ] |
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Reviewed By: happy yaoi lover On: September 17, 2003 23:41 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: holy shit?!an nine inch dick?@_@ wow....I bet ryou enjoyed that! |
Reviewed By: riskygamble [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2003 19:31 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: This series is faptastic! ^_^ (No, that's not a typo.) I really enjoyed all of the chapters. |
Reviewed By: Tongari Saverem On: July 15, 2003 16:33 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: *DROOLS* Um...what can I say?! Besides....DAMN... |
Reviewed By: Sweetdeily [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2003 09:32 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Erotically wonderful. Mm, bondage and toys. My favourite!!!
Lol, I love ficcies like this, the varity was wonderful and *melts* the sex was good. Arigato *winks*
I like the idea of the hikaris getting what they want, a satisfied good boy means a lulled bad boy. Hehehe, I thought it was ingenius how each couple had these little 'things' they wanted. *grins* Malik was by far the evillist. I was laughing right up until I started drooling, then it was hard to keep laughing because I was avoiding wetting the keyboard...
Mmm, an inspirational fiction, I hope to see much more erotica from you! Well done!!!!!!
~_^ |
Reviewed By: Evil Inga and Evil Yami Inga [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2003 00:21 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Evil Inga: ^______^!!!!
Evil Yami Inga: *is looking at our millinum belt* i wonder...
Evil Inga: 0_o?!?! |
Reviewed By: Jack Inoaf On: July 10, 2003 18:41 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: that was really good well i better go befor my teachers see me on the net well i will be waiting 4 chappie 5 |
Reviewed By: Ooahati Elf [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2003 16:39 CDT Comment/Review: wow wow wow...hehehehehe. ^_^ Great! |
Reviewed By: Ooahati Elf [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2003 16:32 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: that is beyond awesome! I love Seto/Jou fics! You did not dissapoint me |
Reviewed By: chaotic kat On: July 07, 2003 12:00 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: blessed goddess! that was great! loved the vibrating egg (story) the best..... how about "a turnabout is fair play"? |
Reviewed By: ssjgoddessChico [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2003 01:37 CDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: LMAO!!! OMG!!! That was so funny!!!! I'd give it higher than a 10 if I could! |
Reviewed By: dragonfly On: June 27, 2003 15:03 CDT Comment/Review: hiya! told ya I'd continue. You should have a sign on the summary sayin: Lemon...Lemon....get your fresh lemons people, lemon right here, I have plenty for everyone. It cost you your time(in a good way). O.O Wow! I've never seen so much lemon in my intire life. well except for the fruit that is. Keep writing and keep your couples the same. |
Reviewed By: Malik Sama On: June 27, 2003 02:08 CDT Comment/Review: Awesome! I love this fic! I can't decide which chapter was my favorite. I love them all! Please write a Ryou+Bakura chapter. That would make it perfect! Go you!! |
Reviewed By: Shadow of Light [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2003 22:12 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Where on earth did you get these ideas?! Hee I remember reading the first two chapters but with hte others two--wow!! mean the tird chapter I THOUGHT it was Bakura or such but then rereading it I figured it wasn't. Hee I loved it and so did my friends I told it about. Two thumbs WAY up!!! |
Reviewed By: dragonfly On: June 26, 2003 21:56 CDT Comment/Review: Wow!...... I'm the first reviewer. This is so cool it feels like.....like.......like first place. yeh! First place*drools off into wonderland* Uuuuuummmm, sorry about that, anyway I've only read Time to Train a Puppy and it was really good. It's getting late so I have to stop, but I can't wait to read the other chappies tomorrow so expect another review from your first reviewer.....hear that, FIRST.....dragonfly. your story was really kawaii, keep writing. |
Reviewed By: Bex On: July 19, 2003 16:07 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: That was an absolutley incredubly amusing fanfic. I loved it!! |
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