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Reviewed By: Me On: October 13, 2003 15:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
this fic is excellent. so far, the characterization is EXCELLENT. please keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: October 08, 2003 16:45 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
What a sweet chapter? What a sweet gesture from Wufei? (sighs) Keep up the GREAT job.
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: October 06, 2003 15:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! This chapter was good. Will Dou be fine? I want to read more Dou and Wufei moments. Keep up the great job and write more soon.
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Reviewed By: aleMania02 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2003 22:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful piece of writing. I commend you for keeping the characters a full personality. They seem real and not results of a "fairy tale, happily ever after" stuffed mind. The way you give voice to the almost heard thoughts in subtle ways gives volume to the piece of work. It separates it from the hurried and rushed works of either prepubescent minds or of people who write for praise. Continue writing! |
Reviewed By: black beauty On: September 03, 2003 17:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is great. Will this be a Wufei and Dou fic? Update soon and keep up the good job. |
Reviewed By: Erszebeth On: August 22, 2003 18:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
One review for this fic, it's just plain not enough. I love the way you write Heero and, in fact, just the idea behind the fic. For once, Heero's mistake involves the pilots and not innocents civilians. Much more real and potent and proportionaly interesting.
Oh, and since I'm french, I apologise for my lousy english... Gomen nasai ! |
Reviewed By: Dyna On: August 22, 2003 12:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
I've been following this story on GWA board and now that it's posted here I have the opportunity to tell you how much I've enjoyed it and have been anticipating each chapter. Heero's kind of out there, but that's the way he was in the series. Seems he hasn't had any real repercussions from his decision that nearly caused the death of two pilots, but I'm sure his comeuppance is coming. I look forward to it. |
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