| "Breaking Away" Reviews/Comments [ 27 ] |
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Reviewed By: amani On: July 07, 2003 21:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it lots! Please continue. You are right though. Yuki in the manga is soo lovable. In later chapters he's opened up quite a bit and Shuichi along with everyone else see's more of this. I can't wait to read til the part they meet again! Write faster! |
Reviewed By: Night On: July 05, 2003 16:15 CDT
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HEHEHE want more, of course ^^
Hum Eiri was a bit out of character but hum as long as it's not becoming tooooo out of character
I can't wait to see next chapter |
Reviewed By: Jade On: July 01, 2003 22:26 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So sad. It almost brought tears to my eyes. Can't wait to see more! Please continue |
Reviewed By: T On: June 30, 2003 15:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I hope you continue!! You now have me interested and I WANT TO READ MORE!!!! Pleaseeeee
continue! Arigato!
Ja ne |
Reviewed By: Night On: June 29, 2003 13:41 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Unexpected, I'd like to see for once a strong Shuishi... and your plot is great.
Please, continue this story! I really look forward to it!
PS get rid of these fu**ing boxes svp |
Reviewed By: T On: June 29, 2003 11:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I LIKE IT! THe only way to improve it is,
yes to get rid of the boxes. Good luck- I don't know how to either. Great job.
Ja ne |
Reviewed By: Mika On: June 27, 2003 16:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hai, I love it please continue
Ja |
Reviewed By: NightWing [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2003 10:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is REALLY good. I like it a lot! A unique plot! I like that~! More please? Hmm... as for the boxes... what type of file did you upload? HTML? Cuz... This never happened in the other fics that I read before... *sweatdrop* Try changing it to other format... Sorry if I'm not much of help...lol |
Reviewed By: Jade On: June 26, 2003 22:56 CDT
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It is good. If I had not read your little A/N I would have asked!^.~ I do hope you contiue. |
Reviewed By: hopemia [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2003 22:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
I want to say "HELLLP"
I can't get rid of these boxes... and everytime I try to reload it... it messes up the format, underlining, bold, highlighted parts.
Arrgh!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: NightWing [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2003 19:54 CDT
Comment/Review:
*purr* Angst filled and love it! Keep it coming~! *heart* |
Reviewed By: Night On: August 06, 2003 10:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
I'm back!!! I'm happy to ha |
Reviewed By: Night On: August 06, 2003 10:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
I'm back!!! I'm happy to ha |
Reviewed By: Night On: August 06, 2003 10:46 CDT
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I'm back!!! I'm happy to ha |
Reviewed By: Night On: August 06, 2003 10:55 CDT
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I'm so glad: a bran new chapter to read!
A mature Shuichi is good but with some GORGEOUS Fr Basq characters: it's even better. I love your story, I wonder what'll happen next... I'd like to see Yuki forced to make a move to get back Shuichi for once and more Fr Basq too
Don't make us wait to long, pleaaaaase ^^;;
[dunno what happened with that review tool ^^;;] |
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