| "You Don't Know What You Have 'Till Its Gone" Reviews/Comments [ 97 ] |
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Reviewed By: Tenshi no Yami On: June 27, 2003 09:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
Good update! ^_^ Sesshou was talkin to himself! lol. He loves her! kawaii! Sessho and Kagome sitting in a tree. K-I-S-S-I-N-G. Actually, that could work. *shakes head* Anyway, gotta fly. L8rz. |
Reviewed By: Weebo [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2003 03:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
[Bows to your writing ability and character preservation] Alright. I give you 10s across the board. That was.. so good. Worth my sleep depervation. You keep true to each character [Even Jaken - Man that deserves a trophy. Maybe even three.], have amazing attention to detail, keep the time factor real [ how kagome wouldn't hunt Sesshoumaru down for a little play between the sheets - you make the man work.], keep Sesshoumaru "real" [Heh - even though he *sniff* isn't. Only on my wall he is. In your story he isn't this obsessed fool drooling over Kagome and ending every this he says to her in "My love.." Or "Beloved..". You get sick of reading those after a while - you know?], and - yes this is the last one - having that fluffy thing that is always on his shoulder be a tail and not a boa. [Didn't he extend his tail one time in the beggining of the series? When they first got Tetsesiga (Yeah. No idea on how thats spelled.)]
Well PLEASE continue. Its very much praise worthy. [HAHA! I'm the first one to comment over here] Take care and let those creative juices flow man!
Until next chapter(s)..
''Weebo The one who sleeps until four in the afternoon and can not sleep when it is dark out. |
Reviewed By: AISURU On: August 06, 2003 15:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
HEY! YOU HAVE SANGO SURPRISED THAT SESSHOUMARU LIVES IN A CASTLE, BUT DIDN'T SHE GO TO HIS CASTLE WHEN SESSHOUMARU TRICKED INUYASHA INTO REVEALING THAT HE CARED MORE FOR KIKYO THAN FOR KAGOME?
ENJOYING THIS STORY, BY THE WAY. :) |
Reviewed By: SilverSurfAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2003 14:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story. I've never read one like this before. Other stories they put Kagome fall in love with Sesshoumaru just like that, but this one it takes her longer. And I can't wait for the next chapter:) I hope Kagome and Sesshoumaru get together again. They would make such a cute couple^_^ |
Reviewed By: Chihiro Kohaku [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2003 10:58 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
AHH!!*SIGH*
Sesshoumaru's in love with a miko ningen.
It's sweet. Cuz I love the pairing Sess/Kag.
PLEASE finish updating. |
Reviewed By: Mistress Fluffy On: July 15, 2003 14:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
Love it! I forgot that you had this one... hehe... Well it's good! Update soon. |
Reviewed By: sesshoumaru lover1 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2003 16:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
there i always do what i am told. ::wink wink ::
well n e way i am in a cheery mood today because I found out some thing wonderful!!!!! Great story please continue the story it is turning out wonderfully!!!!! ::tsk tsk:: kagome is sooo evil.
p.s
my friend read the story and could not review so he told me to review for him. so this is for both of us. :: me and julio ^_~ :: |
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