| "It Couldn't Be True" Reviews/Comments [ 32 ] |
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Reviewed By: Jessica Barton On: March 12, 2004 15:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooooo, now it's getting interesting. This story is definetly having me check in each day to see if you've updated it. Please continue in the very very near future!
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Reviewed By: soundofonehandclapping On: February 16, 2004 22:52 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This is one of the best s/s ficcies I've ever seen anywhere
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Reviewed By: SchannsQueen [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2003 14:57 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic. hope you update soon...If you want to. *...begging* ahem....PWEASES!!!!!^_^
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Reviewed By: TB On: September 08, 2003 23:07 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hmmmm...where are you taking this...
Is Dagen going to interfere anymore?
What's gonna happen?!??!
update ASAP!!! |
Reviewed By: elsceyb On: August 25, 2003 07:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's still a good story, I'd just like to see a little more description as standard. It's also kind of confusing the way you write after someone's speech. IF it's Sefier speaking then after the " mark you shouldn't be talking about Dagen, or anyone else's responces until the next paragraph. After the " is usually reserved to the manner in which the character has spoken e.g. "Get the fuck out of my way!" Seifer snapped angrilly. |
Reviewed By: Tibbs [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2003 20:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
What's gonna happen?!?!?! Definately update soon
you've done good so far, keep it up |
Reviewed By: Queen of Eternal Darkness [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2003 19:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lemme gguess what happened to Squall.... Dagen gave him a sleeping potion to drink rite? |
Reviewed By: Queen of Eternal Darkness [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2003 17:36 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's nicee plz continue ASAP and make lonnnger chappyss |
Reviewed By: Queen of Eternal Darkness [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2003 16:20 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's nicee ^_^ cotinue ASAP |
Reviewed By: rxcspid On: July 10, 2003 05:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this ficcie to no end!! cintinue as soonas humanly posible! |
Reviewed By: Kaji The Bloody Harlequin [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2003 16:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh more!!! I love it so far! Stupid Dagen... |
Reviewed By: Queen of Eternal Darkness [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2003 17:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a very nicee and cool ficcy i loved reading it. i really dont havta explain why i gave u those rating rite? anyways continue ASAP |
Reviewed By: Tibbs [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2003 16:07 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You've left your readers on a pretty high cliff...
UPDATE ASAP!!!! |
Reviewed By: Heather On: July 02, 2003 23:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
I found it quite interesting. I hope to see more. |
Reviewed By: Tibbs [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2003 13:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
What's gonna happen
update ASAP |
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