"Shikon High" Reviews/Comments [ 33 ] |
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Reviewed By: Aditu On: September 03, 2003 08:50 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: excellent story.
I don't usually read school fanfics since most of them don't catch my interest, but I have to say that you have a wonderful version going here.
You do a good job with providing a realistic personification of the characters, I easily get a mental image of the scenery and events as they happen from your descriptions and...well, I guess I should just tie it up that you writing skills are great.
I enjoy the fact that you also are not rushing things along with Inu and Kag, just little teasers that are building up, lol.
Keep up the excellent work and I'm looking forward to reading future chapters! Best wishes! |
Reviewed By: MoROn4Life [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2003 23:00 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: haha How cute they're going to a dance together! Hmm I bet Inu-yasha Screws something up at the dance right? I hope so he only makes THE PARTY FUNNER! |
Reviewed By: Llorona [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2003 18:20 CDT Comment/Review: I thought I should go ahead and add a review (I can't believe I didn't before). This fic is great so far! You have a fantastic writing style - please keep up the good work and update some more! :) |
Reviewed By: Kissi21 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2003 22:52 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Great. Please continue. Loving it. |
Reviewed By: Yanou [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2003 23:56 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Wicked!!?!
Two thumbs up on this one, and I'll definitely watch out for the next update...Lovn it!!?!
~Always |
Reviewed By: Mary Ann [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2003 14:47 CDT Comment/Review: wow this is good keep it up
update when you can |
Reviewed By: mandi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2003 04:24 CDT Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: At first I wasn't sure if I wanted to read this fic or not, but I figured 'hey, give it a try" And am I glad I did that!! I really enjoyed this fic and I can't wait for you to update soon! I really liked Amariand all, what a clumsy little oaf!!hehehe, it would be just like him to get knocked into a trash can!! Anywho, on with the fic!! *applause*
~mandi |
Reviewed By: fangurl On: July 31, 2003 18:45 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: COOL FIC. PLEASE CONTINUE |
Reviewed By: Rei-chan On: July 24, 2003 03:11 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: You can take this story very far, and I'm VERY interrested. Please continue. I love the concept you've made for your storyline!!!! |
Reviewed By: nightangel On: July 12, 2003 12:43 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Wow... so far you got my attention in the story... i like it.. it's different and that's good and i like how everybody interacted with one another... hope your next chapter comes out soon! |
Reviewed By: BernarD On: July 11, 2003 11:30 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: VERY COOL STORY!!! KEEP WRITING MORE!! |
Reviewed By: Lor [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2003 15:45 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: love your fic! I'm going to be watching for updates so update soon! |
Reviewed By: MikoKagome On: July 03, 2003 10:56 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Please Please finish! Super fanfic. |
Reviewed By: ari On: July 02, 2003 16:17 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: i can't say anything really but i loved how you left it off right before the first encounter. it makes me laugh it's cute! i can't give you n e thumbs up yet considering we haven't really gotten into n e thing yet but it is getting off to a good start! |
Reviewed By: Kitten On: July 02, 2003 15:24 CDT Comment/Review: I love it! It's a great start and has potential to be really good! I hope you update soon! |
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