| "My Heart's Own" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Saria On: July 23, 2003 17:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's pretty good. Great jod! Next time put a little more story and detail into this story, if you do, you'll be just fine. |
Reviewed By: Zelinko On: July 22, 2003 14:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
I like the fact that this relationship is being explored and also the setup of your story. So Shippo may unite the Western and Eastern Lands in a permenant alliance |
Reviewed By: Dragon Master Duelist On: July 02, 2003 17:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, I'll be honest. It's a good start, but it wasn't that good. I understand that you are doing your first Inu Yasha fic, but if you want people to read it, you need to make it longer. Are you going to have a long period flashforward? I hope so. This isn't a flame, just an honest opinion. I'll keep reading your fic though. Go ahead and hate me if you want, but I just wanna help you make your story good. |
