| "First Year" Reviews/Comments [ 48 ] |
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Reviewed By: AsianEyes [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2003 10:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fanfic is great and original. The only downside is that I think your chapters could use a little more detail...
Otherwise, this fanfic is very interesting and I hope you update soon.
Oh yeah, I vote for Sess/Kag. I just can't imagine Kurama with Kagome. |
Reviewed By: Al On: August 21, 2003 21:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Are you gonna make second, third, fourth, and fifth year. i think that would be good i'd read all of it and you no stuff. Hehehehe |
Reviewed By: Eternal Dark Teen On: August 11, 2003 12:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I give these rating just because its a cool fic. Write more. Can't wait to see chapter 8 and more author. |
Reviewed By: Al On: August 04, 2003 18:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love all how you adding three different shows together its just amazing. i love and enjoy every moment i can't wait to read the whole thing even though i will be sad that it is finished. |
Reviewed By: Somebody On: July 23, 2003 22:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! Great fic!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: kagome_07 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2003 20:53 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great,in 1 word COOL!!!!You've got to update soon or I'll go crazy. |
Reviewed By: bleedingwings666 On: July 20, 2003 18:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
plz up date
soon |
Reviewed By: Legolas On: July 18, 2003 17:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good, I loved it, update ASAP! |
Reviewed By: Lady*Starless*Knight [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2003 02:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
'ello, i don't know jack sh*t about that rating *beep* so i won't do it, i like your story, so, want a choclate bar? ^_^ please write more soon!!
Goddess Bless and later dayz
Lady*Starless*Knight
PS my muse, C.G.C says hi
PPS chibi gothic cthulhu
and did my HTML tags work? hope so |
Reviewed By: gracie On: July 17, 2003 20:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
nice, nice! I think you made your characters seem more adapted to their surroundings in this chapter |
Reviewed By: gracie On: July 17, 2003 19:54 CDT
Comment/Review:
Foxes! What a cute idea!It inspired me to pick up my new kitten and hold her as I read on. Oh! And I had no name for her until I read of "Youko" |
Reviewed By: gracie On: July 17, 2003 19:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
to be quite frank with you, you had the story all down, but the writing it self was a little.....well I don't know. Here's a word of advice, imagine youself in each characters point of view, and then start writing. But what I see you doing is, "oh well, this is what is to be said by Kurama in order for Kagome to believe this and yada yada....." Do you get what I'm saying? Sorry, it was bothering me!
gracie:...... :* I feel like a teacher..... |
Reviewed By: nemetfire [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2003 22:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
this story is really interesting. I never imagined a Kag and Kurama pairing, but the idea sounds cute. I usually liked sessho and Kag but the idea of kurama and her is really interesting. why don't you make kagome fall in love with both, she can't make her mind. damn just make her have both, I don't think they would mind sharing. I'm crazy. |
Reviewed By: lysel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2003 21:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
cool please update soon |
Reviewed By: lysel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2003 21:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
cool please update soon |
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