| "Wild Sleepover" Reviews/Comments [ 17 ] |
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Reviewed By: Sundragon (not signed on) On: December 30, 2003 19:45 CST
Comment/Review:
FANTASTICO! WOW! LOVE THIS! PLEASE UPDATE! I wish i could write lemons like you! Wahhhh! LOVE THIS! Are you going to update Harpy Lady Sisters? PLEASE! ADIOS!
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Title: eye opener
Reviewed By: the rurouni [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2003 21:11 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
bloody hell that is AN AWESOME FANFIC to bad i can't write lemons that well.....
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Reviewed By: LemonySweet13 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2003 23:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
U know u write the best sex scenes? I can't write one for shit. I'm going to have to tho, for my fic on ff.net. U did the best yuri I have read so far. It is so hot.
Holla
LemonySweet |
Reviewed By: Stykish One On: July 30, 2003 20:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
If you've managed to capture my attention thus far, you MUST have capabilities as a writer. Keep up the erotic work. ^_^ Ganbatte! |
Reviewed By: Kanpeki [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2003 02:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a very enjoyable read and I hope you continue to write more. Great story for a Lemon without having too much storyline to get boring. This was the perfect combination. Keep up the good work. |
Reviewed By: Confused On: July 24, 2003 17:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked this. It's the first yuri w/sex fic that I have ever read and I enjoyed it a lot. Keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: Kurai Neko On: July 22, 2003 01:46 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
. . . . Cool . . . . ^_^
Please write more fics like this. It KICKED ASS!!!! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: JC On: July 13, 2003 00:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
Well how would it lok it their was foursome latter on and if deside to go with this the chapters before could lead up to it. |
Reviewed By: GuyNoaSheriteck On: July 12, 2003 14:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well loved.I am a guy after all and of course a lesbian is the sexiest thing on earth to me.Liked it alot> |
Reviewed By: Aida [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2003 07:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love this fic ^^ Best yuri I've read to date. I usually dislike self-insertion fics, but thats because 90% of Yugioh self-insertion is " A mysterious girl comes to dominio. She has the millennium bracelet. Seto/Yami/Bakura/Malik thinks he remembers her." And they all run out the same -.- But I love your writing. I think two of the first yaoi I read were "Forever is a Long Time" and "All the Things He Said"(Which got me hooked on Seto/Mokuba.)So please continue this fic!!
Also...I'm guessing by the name Nova...are you an MKR fan? Cause in MKR Nova is like Hikaru's Yami...well. You might not be, it's just a guess :D |
Reviewed By: Neko-chan35 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2003 02:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
Yes! You should stay, and write more! I'm now obessed w/ sex secenes, no matter which kind, too! Sad thing is I can't write them... but I'm attempting it in my story here. As for the Southern Bell thing, any girl who has lived in the South and is not ashamed of who she is IS a Southern Bell. ^^ Thought you might wanna know. TTYL
Neko-chan |
Reviewed By: cece On: July 11, 2003 12:00 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice! i like it!!! keep writin'!!! |
Reviewed By: Neko-chan35 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2003 19:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey there, my fellow Southern Bell, I would like to say your yuri is the first I've ever read. It's a cute plot w/ major sex, a kick ass combo.
Yours Truly,
Neko-chan |
Reviewed By: un named On: July 07, 2003 18:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Shizuka should get in on the action please write more |
Reviewed By: MykeAbner [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2003 04:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it! I hope you write another fic like this sometime! |
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