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Title: Don't Cry
Reviewed By: Fairy goddess [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2008 01:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool story! More than cool, I've read this story before and lost track of it and was glad to find it again, by accident with two updates I haven't read yet. I was so into your before I lost it that when I found it I didn't have to reread the chapters I remebered all of it. I was sad to see that it hasn't been updated in a long, long time, come on. There are enough abandon fics on this site. Wake this one up it's to good to just sit there ignored, you deserve better as well as your story and your fans. I love this fic it is so different than others I've read. Sessy and Koga working together as best friends almost, being a family allowing Shippo to call him uncle. Kagome not knowingn how to get home, Inuyashia being controlled by Narku, I think that part when Sessy met his brother was excellent, I thought for sure he'd ignore Kagome and kill him for what he had done. The telekenises (can't spell that word, taking mentally to eachother.) is excellent between the three and how they had to bond in the first place to understand eachoter is an excellent different idea. I hope all is well and that nothing horrid or anything of the such stopped you or delayed your work on this excellent story. Write on! Much love Fairy Goddess.
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Reviewed By: entropy9 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2006 13:15 CDT
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Not bad...I'm pretty interested actually...I've only read the first chapter so far...I'm curious though how a v-neck dress has spaghetti straps...sorry for the weird nitpick, it just doesn't sound possible! lol...anyway that's not important, you're a pretty good writer, and I can't wait to see what else you plan to do!
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Title: Don't Cry
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2006 15:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Can the pairing be Sess, Kagome, and Kouga please?
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2005 02:35 CDT
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My last review was in 2004 and the only reason why this story is still on my favorites list is because it's one of the best I've ever read and I still have faith that you'll update one day. And I would also like to add that I've graduated since that last review!
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Reviewed By: Saphire Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2005 01:43 CDT
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umm...I've really liked this fic for a very long time and would REALLY (can't stress that word enough) like to see another chapter. I absolutly love it and have been waiting but still no update *cries* also if you have actually just moved the story or just no longer write on mediaminer I would appreciate if you would update giving a link *is desperate and hoping to find explanation* also I'm really sorry all I've really been saying is update update but I love this fic so much and would love to read more
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Title: Don't Cry
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2005 13:10 CST
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Title: Don't Cry
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer On: November 15, 2004 20:47 CST
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Title: I wish...
Reviewed By: Heavenly Youkai On: September 24, 2004 17:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow it's wonderful I cant wait untill you update. hmm... it's been awhile. Did you forget you posted here? Again. Man I wish I was Kagome ::Sigh:: she has all the luck. My first threesome wasn't nearly as fun as that one. well any ways please update soon. Ja Ne
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Title: creative and delightful story
Reviewed By: arianna On: July 27, 2004 15:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love to read anime/manga stories and i have alot of them, but when i read yours i thought it was original in its own way and it was interesting that instead of inu-yasha you use kouga. Then they started to have a realationship and you had the same characters but in a different type of plot.! But can you please to keep writting, cause i am a big fan of yours now! LOL -ARianna
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Title: GREAT!SUPERB!PERFECT!
Reviewed By: MikoMaiden [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2004 12:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey! I loved ypur story!please let Sessho become her 2nd mate!***drools* Sessho and Kouga....**drools even mmore** I LOVE YOUR STORY!
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Reviewed By: musheesuh On: June 20, 2004 20:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
nice.:wink:
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness(not signed on) On: June 20, 2004 17:19 CDT
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You want to tell me what happened to you??? You haven't updated since september!!!!! That is so cruel!!!!! To leave a cliff for that long!!!! And don't you dare say it was school!!! I go to school and finished two original stories, two song fics, a one-shot, and I'm still going!!!!!!!! And that threesome didn't win me over at all, nope, no, not one bit. *looks around nervously because she knows shes lying!* Okay well maybe a little^_^ So are ya gonna update from now on??? Well you should know that there were some miss-spelled words, some of those 'of's' need to be changed to 'off's'. And at one point I think you were talking about Kagome's high 'pitched' screams but you wrote high 'bitched' screams. So is Sesshoumaru thinking about getting a human mate because we're more fun to have sex with??? Hopefully you'll update soon and answer the question.
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Reviewed By: Shadowfoxdemon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2004 16:39 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE UPDATE AS SOON AS POSSIBLE. EXCELLENT STORY.
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Reviewed By: BloodTh1rst On: June 17, 2004 09:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The last time I read this fic.was over nine months ago, then it had fifteen chapters. I'm reading it again,nine months later,and you have not updated it again yet. In your last note ,at the bottom of ch. fifteen, you said that you got another penname...I was wondering if you could send it to me? Also ,if somehow I'm missing something and you DID/HAVE updated your fic."Don't Cry". could you send it to me? DaughterofDemons@juno.com THANKS! I LOVE YOUR FANFIC. STORY!!!
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Reviewed By: bonkers231 On: June 15, 2004 11:49 CDT
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This is a really good fic. PLEASE write more chapters. I love the way Sesshoumaru is being so nice, not that I dont love the cold harted Sesshoumaru, Kouga and Kagome thats so kool. Well all in all this a grate fic and I cant wait for more chapters. keep up the good work and thanks for a grate fic.*BIG SMILE* :D
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