| "Vacation Blues" Reviews/Comments [ 66 ] |
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Reviewed By: Toki Mirage [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2004 21:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE ALREADY!!! THIS IS THE SECOND TIME IN LIKE, FOUR MONTHS I'VE READ THIS!!! i want to know what happens, is that so hard to ask??!!! *sniff*
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Reviewed By: C.M Aeris [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2003 21:10 CST
Comment/Review:
I knew something was familiar about this story! IF YOU EVER REPOST YOUR STORIES IN FF.NET PLEASE PUT THIS BACK UP!!!! PLEASE!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Shinigami24 On: December 25, 2003 20:07 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I dunno about the porno movies, since I only have the first 3 volumes of the translated manga... But I've read enough to know that Yami is a sadistic bastard... The part where he set the gang members on fire in volume 3 was enough to creep me out...Not to mention what Yami did to Joey's former gang! I noticed he mainly takes over when Yugi and his friends are hurt. The black fire is something new entirely! And I only saw about 2 episdoes of the anime, since I never have the time to watch it...I only saw the part when Duke made Joey wear the dog costume, and one other, when Mai and Malik dueled, but since Malik was using Shadow magic, I'm thinking it was Marik she dueled...Yugi seemed like a nice guy, but I never got to see how Yami fought, so I dunno if he's different from the manga...
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Reviewed By: Mood [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2003 11:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic...Shi-Koi you've done it again. I just re-discovered why I love cross-overs so much. Try and finish it if you can...finishing crossovers is hard, but try to. I want to know what you want to happen. You're writing is always good and you're pairings are good too. Keep going.
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Reviewed By: bebe On: September 10, 2003 15:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my god! that is ssssssssoooooooooooo good!
you have to continue this! now! you read me! NOW! |
Reviewed By: Fallen Hikari [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2003 12:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
hey---
excellent chapter. you're a very skilled write when it comes to action. the scenes were very well depicted.
that whole part about yami becoming flames and connecting with the shadows...wow...that was neat. i got chills as i read it. and all just because he was protecting yugi---awwww.
can't wait to see more.
keep up the great work and please update soon!
~*Fallen Hikari*~ ^__^ |
Reviewed By: Vegakitty On: August 23, 2003 11:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Vega: *squee!* I was glomped! I feel the love! *spins and dances*
Wufei: Will you stop that?! Didn't you read the chapter? Didn't you see the destruction and death and power?! How can you be dancing at a time like this?! *hyperventilates*
Vega: *stops and waves off-handedly* Oh pishposh, Wuffie-kins. I saw it and hit the monitor with my head leaning in. It was so cool wasn't it!
Wufei: Cool? COOL!? ARG! *stomps off*
Vega: *blinks* Don't mind him, he's just mad we ran out of cheesecake squares. Glad you like my reviews, now I'm gonna be your own little cheerleader *waves pompoms* Goooooooo Shi-koi-sama! Yah! *ponders recruting RyuArashi* |
Reviewed By: Ooahati Elf [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2003 21:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like... I like. Good job so far! ^_~
~Zufluchtsort~ |
Reviewed By: Silent Sniper On: July 11, 2003 16:28 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it so far!! I want to know whats gonna happen! ^____^ Update! |
Reviewed By: Holly Trest On: July 07, 2003 13:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
This story is great. I can't wait for more! |
Reviewed By: RyuArashi On: July 07, 2003 12:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Shi-koi-sannnn!!!!! Where have you been?! *crying with joy* As usual, your stories are excellent...I'm sorry you have writer's block...It's the dumps, isn't it?*sighs* But I always love your stories-they're so well-written!Please update soon, ne? |
Reviewed By: Protector of love between Yami and Yugi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2003 13:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You need to update this story. I want to see what happens to Yami and Yugi and how the others will react to more shadow magic. This sotry I'm prodicting will be very interesting like all your other stories. |
Reviewed By: Jadesaber [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2003 12:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
This sounds interesting so far. I hope you post more soon! I want to see what happens next! |
Reviewed By: Vegakitty On: July 05, 2003 21:50 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Vega: Oh! The wonderful, amazing Shi-koi strikes again! And I agree, how many fics do you have running around unfinished?
Wufei: You're one to talk, don't you have a few as well and you don't even have a account anywhere.
Vega: *looks a bit sheepish* er... heh ^_^; Anyway! I like YGO/HP crossovers! Hurry and finish this one, it's going somewhere I like! |
Reviewed By: chipperke On: July 05, 2003 18:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the idea of the story, and I can't wait for the rest. I can't wait untill Harry and his friends meet Yami and Yuugi. At least they got 6 months of vaction before it went bad. |
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