| "It's in the Family" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] |
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Reviewed By: deivlgirl On: February 13, 2004 21:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
u need to updated it soon.its really good story so updated.please.
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Reviewed By: Cristina On: February 07, 2004 18:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I thought your first fanfic was excellent and that you wouldn't be able to top it. But you proved me wrong! :) Like your first fanfic once I started to read I just couldn't stop, and now you have me in suspense to see what will happen in Chapter 8. And finally what happens in the end. Keep up the brilliant work! :)
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Title: Speechless!
Reviewed By: Tingeta On: January 17, 2004 19:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What can i say I'm speechless! I absolutely loved it! My favourite bit is seeing the characters evolve, growing up, but still staying the same, well you know what I mean. Well I can't wait to see what happens in the end. I can see I'm going to be still speachless..lol..Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Falcony32 On: December 14, 2003 21:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So far this is a very good story. Keep up the good work. Looking forward to an update.
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Reviewed By: kmf [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2003 04:22 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Apologies for taking so long to review this. Im so pleased to finally get a chance to read the first chapter in your sequel. Im really looking forward to learning more about what Cleo can achieve with her gift and more too about Alik. Majic's feelings were very understandable, and Orphen did a fine job of reassuring the lad. All in all a very nice beginning to what I hope is going to be another epic story ^_^
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