| "From Dreams to Reality" Reviews/Comments [ 34 ] |
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Title: great~!
Reviewed By: Taylerkaler On: November 14, 2003 00:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am really enjoying your fic! Please continue!
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Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2003 11:47 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update soon please i love it i want to know what happens next please
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Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2003 11:43 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please please please please update soon : )
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Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2003 20:39 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update soon i love it bye
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Title: An interesting twist
Reviewed By: MKyrissaean [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2003 12:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it - quite a unique twist on the story. Please update soon. :)
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Reviewed By: Toki Mirage [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2003 22:22 CDT
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dude! what was with the cut off! ^_^ n e way, i'm glad you FINALLY updated, i was gettin bored, ya know? ^_- ciao
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Title: Back again
Reviewed By: Demoness of the Dark [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2003 21:02 CDT
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It definately took you long enough to update missy...I think something might be wrong with the chapter though since on my screen I'm missing the bottom part of it. It cuts off in mid sentence and I don't know if it was uploaded wrong or if you left it that way. Now since you updated I'm going to have to get my ass in gear and finish revising mine amd post it...another thing, you know I'm not that easily fooled in real life...You can hardly get away with anything around me and yet it look very gulible in the story...hmmm....somebody's getting revenge....oh yes I can see it now...lol...well I just thought I would review...again. See ya later.
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Reviewed By: Hawkk On: August 30, 2003 22:08 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
The stupid thing won't let me be signed in & write a review at the same time! And I can't use HawkBlade. That's annoying...Anyways! GREAT fic! Interesting, & fun to read! Could it be real? Please! |
Reviewed By: Tenko On: July 18, 2003 01:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 2 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry, but this is rather poorly written. The writting style is immature at best, the story feels rushed, and you really need to work on your grammar.
Oh, and one more thing, the whole self-insert/Mary Sue thing is not only old, but it was crap to begin with. |
Reviewed By: Shimotsuki On: July 13, 2003 03:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 2 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 2 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Sigh* Yet another *self-insertion* fic... This is one, is it not? This is what *you* do, is it not?
Let me tell you first, hun, that it's not attractive to be putting random *lols* and phrases within the story... It subtracts enormously from the reading enjoyment.
The grammar was rather bad. So was the punctuation. Those are simple necessities that many people overlook, but they are the some of most important...
As for the story writing itself, it's not something that I would call *skilled*. It's not atrocious, and it's definitely not the worst I've seen, but the sentences are short, cropped, detached, and I could name so many more. Slow down, elaborate more upon the details, actually give this "Haily" character some flesh... So far, I see no personality from her. It's much too rushed.
Overall, this story wasn't terribly interesting, and I didn't find it enjoyable to read at all... It seems to me that it's a self insertion fic, although it is not under that category, and self insertions are not what the majority of readers enjoy reading... But it's your story. The writing style was bare, the punctuation and grammar was a far cry from being somewhat decent, and it doesn't appear that you are taking this writing seriously.
I give it a 2. |
Reviewed By: Lady Sethia [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2003 04:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, now you have got to update soon. *sobs* I am loving the story, please keep it coming |
Reviewed By: Lady Sethia [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2003 04:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
| Reviewed By: clashkitty43 On: July 09, 2003 23:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! You came up with such a cool and unique story! Your fic made me feel a little better about my Inu-obsession. Reading fanfics is a bribe to myself when I'm writing papers for school. 'Two more paragraphs and I'll take a fanfic break!' I can totally relate and, considering the audience, I'm sure a lot of people can relate. I can't wait to read more! |
Reviewed By: Lonely Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2003 22:05 CDT
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I can imagine by now that she is very freaked out right around now...A stranger in the room...I wonder who he could be *nudge*. I hope I find out soon! |
Reviewed By: Demoness of the Dark [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2003 21:29 CDT
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That ending so wasn't fair, but for you it works the way that you lef it. Now you definately have to update or I'm going to haunt you in your dreams until you update. Keep going with it! |
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