| "Burning Sea" Reviews/Comments [ 57 ] |
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Reviewed By: Immrotal_hunter [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2003 16:33 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey pls hurry I'm loving this fic!!!\
HURRY W/H the lemon!!! I NEED TO READ ONE WITH MALIK!!! |
Reviewed By: lunarsfire [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2003 15:21 EDT
Comment/Review:
I'm in love with this story. so please continue soon. |
Reviewed By: R_Winner [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2003 18:13 EDT
Comment/Review:
U HAVE 2 WRITE MORE PLZ!!! |
Reviewed By: Kawaii_Chibi_Neko On: July 22, 2003 00:29 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think you did a good job
I'm not use to this type of story, but I know what I like and what I like is this story. I hope you'll continue to write more soon.
I'm pretty picky with the stories I read, so I hope you'll continue doing the great job you've done so far! Because I love the plot and the general setting you have here! Continue that great ficcy. |
Reviewed By: Sumomo [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2003 20:51 EDT
Comment/Review:
Sumomo: Yaoi yet?
Marik: Okay, you just like to get to the good stuff, don't ya?
Sumomo:... I hate it when he's right> |
Reviewed By: LuCiFeR On: July 16, 2003 18:31 EDT
Comment/Review:
MUAAHAHAHA!!! Hey, told ya i'd stop by!
*looks up* I think i kinda like Sweetdeily's review. mmmmm....kinky, hot, bondage, screaming kinda lemons....yummm.....oops, drooling on the keyboard.^_^
Yeah, i luve your writing style, and the way you made Yami all kick-but and evil-ish.
Of course I'm gonna be stuck on pirates fer weeks now...
Oh well, off to see Pirates of the Carribean i guess...
~Luci |
Reviewed By: alaisiagae [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2003 01:29 EDT
Comment/Review:
Will you write more soon? please? this fic of yours is very origional and an awesome read.
please add more to it as soon as you can
:) |
Reviewed By: Sweetdeily [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2003 08:17 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've always been such a fan of Pirate fictions, and it is sooooo hard to find Yaoi pirate fictions and you've just blown me away.
This was so good!!!! I loved it!!!!!!!!! I seriously can't wait for more. You've spun the story so magnificently! *sighs* It's so coooooooollll!!!!!!
I hope you write more really soon or I'll just DIE!!!!!!
This ficcie was just soooo snuggle-lastic! and and *romantic sigh* It's so cool that Yami's a badass. I'm also glad that the boys aren't whimps. And one is prepared to eat flesh... ehehe, although that sorta made my gut turn, i mean, itaiiiiii!!!
But seriously though, the character developement is wonderful *likes how Ryou can cry and still be a pain* Although it'd be interesting to see some more detail on Yugi, although I get the feeling that Ryou is the favourite, *which she is thrilled with, so often semi-main characters don't get enough staring rolls* but the other two, I think it would be good to get a bit more emotion from.
The only draw backs I can find to your most amazingly wonderful writing is a slight confusion from dialouge. Although your description kicks serious ass. *could practically SEE the bedrooms*
Lol, I think my favourite bit to date was when Yami was trying to get to sleep and told the other two to stop screwing *cackles fangirlish* that was SUCH a classic.
Can your reviewer slaves hope for lemons in chapters to come? And of the kinky, hot, bondage, screaming kind??????? We'll worship at your feet, well, at least I will. *winks* Don't stop!!!!!!! My life depends on this gem continuing!!!! ~.^ |
Reviewed By: Mayonaka On: July 11, 2003 21:55 EDT
Comment/Review:
yay good story............. i want you to continue it............. it is really good so far and i really want to kno what happens.............. yay 4 yami(lol i always say that) |
Reviewed By: cece On: July 10, 2003 21:44 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
waiiiiiiii!!!! i luv this!!! please write more!!! its sooooo cool!!! |
Reviewed By: Death Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2003 19:29 EDT
Comment/Review:
More! |
Reviewed By: val gal :) On: July 09, 2003 18:25 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! this is a really good story so far!! i'm compleatly addicted!!! please up date soon. *sniff, sniff* is that a lemon i smell in the near future? i hope!! thanx!!!!
^_^ |
Reviewed By: Black Fury On: July 09, 2003 15:50 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
in a word?
THIS FIC IS F'ING AWESOME (sorry, that's 4)
But it still rocks! |
Reviewed By: Vegakitty On: July 09, 2003 01:52 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Vega: Whooo! Pirates! This wouldn't happen to have anything to do with the realease of Pirates of the Carribien, would it?
Wufei: *yawns* Shut up and reveiw.
Vega: Cranky... Anyway, it's different and I like that. Keep it up! *waves* Bye!
Wufei: *grabs Vega and leaves* G'bye! |
Reviewed By: Fallen Hikari [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2003 23:43 EDT
Comment/Review:
hey---
great fic. i find it very original!! and it's hard to find a fic. that can weave a lot of the characters together like you have.
keep up the great work and please update soon!
~*Fallen Hikari*~ ^__^ |
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