| "Yeah, He is" Reviews/Comments [ 51 ] |
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Reviewed By: Hawkk On: August 30, 2003 22:47 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
The voices! I hear voices! lol! Anyhow, stupid mm won't let me be signed in & type a review at the same time...
I wonder, will Hojo remember all he learned in school while he was Onigumo? What shall Shippou's revenge be? GREAT fic! |
Reviewed By: Chibi Halo [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2003 22:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just finished reading all 33 chapters of the first story today and everything you wrote so far in this one. With not much to do around the house it was an easy feat. The first story made me laugh especially that Donkey gag. The follow up is just as good. And you do a great follow up to the donkey gag with the old man grandpa jokes. I guess he's getting what he deserves for making up all those old people diseases for Kagome to have to explain why she was away from school so much.
Who would ever have thought that Mrs. H's boyfriend Rudy would end up being Kouga. I like how you at least gave him a history with Ayame first before having him hook up with Kagome's mom. I also liked the explination you gave for what happened with all the wolf youkai in the world. So now we have to wonder what in the world the entity who controlled Naraku has in store for our little ever growing band of heroes. I for one would love to see Kouga end up marrying Kagome's mom. Keep up the excellent work. I look forward to your next installment. |
Reviewed By: HawkBlade [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2003 17:33 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Wow! I haven't gotten on for a while & look at all the wonderful chaptes! Yay! Hojo got beat up! now....since he was knocked unconcious, will it be Hojo who comes back? What will Kagome do when she finds out what the boys did...& that Inuyasha can walk? I sound like an advertisment\preview thing! Bleh! Yeah! Anyways keep up the great writing! |
Reviewed By: Videogamer On: August 14, 2003 00:07 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Love the story, but why isn't it on fanfiction.net anymore? This site takes literally forever to load! |
Reviewed By: henishuy On: August 01, 2003 14:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
hey it was realy good but if you added more chapters it would beeven better hope you get more soon |
Reviewed By: HawkBlade [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2003 22:55 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Oi! Jenjie, or-how-ever-his-name-is-spelt, showed up! Damn computer doesn't let me get on the internet! Poor Eri!! That earned some laughs! Great job w\ everything! I'll keep reading as I can get on, promise. Ja! |
Reviewed By: Inuyasha Freak On: July 29, 2003 12:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is great!I always like fanfics that pair up Inuyasha and Kagome during or after the actual adventure.I hope there are more chapters soon.^_^ |
Reviewed By: Hawk On: July 23, 2003 18:10 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
YaY another chapter!! Poor Shippou, he really can't know anything! Anyways, when are we going to learn about this enemy? Inuyasha's paralyzed?! And he had to be helped by Kouga! That must've been a blow to his pride! Story's still awesome!! |
Reviewed By: Hawk On: July 19, 2003 22:39 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Ahh! Inuyasha!!! Hey, I just relized something! Since Hojo is Onigumo who is Naraku, does that mean he gets killed? ...Or will they just knock him out & hope it's Hojo that comes back instead of Onigumo or Naraku? ...but could Naraku come back at all?? I'm having a debate w\ myself on a review that has even confused me.....gomen. |
Reviewed By: Hawk On: July 19, 2003 22:26 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Lol!! Couldn't have Kagome so he went after her mom, eh? This is fun!!! |
Reviewed By: Hawk On: July 19, 2003 22:14 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Kouga?! lol. this shall be interesting!! |
Reviewed By: Hawk On: July 19, 2003 22:01 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Oi! You've updated lots!! I can just see Yasha learning that fast and then reading everything! K, on to the next chapt.... |
Reviewed By: Usagitsukino [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2003 12:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
good one, keep writing! |
Reviewed By: Inu'sgirl On: July 15, 2003 21:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Keep Writing!!!!!! I'ts SOOOOOO GOOOOOOOD ^_____^ |
Reviewed By: Inu'sgirl On: July 15, 2003 21:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Keep Writing!!!!!! I'ts SOOOOOO GOOOOOOOD ^_____^ |
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