| "Misunderstanding" Reviews/Comments [ 36 ] |
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Reviewed By: AngelWings [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2003 04:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Chapter 5 was cute or maybe Im juss saying that because Kurama was in it ^_^ Either way I am really enjoying your fic. Pleaseee continue to update. |
Reviewed By: sweet On: August 01, 2003 21:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was very excelent but...............PPLLEEOOPPLLEE WWHHHYYY DDOONN'TT YYOOUU EEVVEERRY FFFIINNIISSHH TTTTHHHEEEMM !!!!!???? THATS ALL I WANT TO KNOW |
Reviewed By: Aileen [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2003 13:35 CDT
Comment/Review:
Poor Hiei. No, wait...Poor Yukina. Aragh! Now I'm all mixed up. Oh well. If this is your first fic, then I'm sure the next ones will be the best! You're a lot better than you think. |
Reviewed By: AnimeAngel007 On: July 30, 2003 19:57 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
FUNNY!!! |
Reviewed By: 4U2NV On: July 29, 2003 12:31 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a very interesting story. Quite humorous. You should give yourself more credit. If this really is your first fanfic you're gonna be one hell of a writer when you get older. Overall rating 10/10. Keep up the good work. |
Reviewed By: midnitedreams On: July 25, 2003 18:22 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, nice fic. I always thought what would happen if Yukina likes Hiei, not in the sibling kind. You make the story go beyond what I could think of. So keep up the great work. |
Reviewed By: sweet On: August 01, 2003 21:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was very excelent but...............PPLLEEOOPPLLEE WWHHHYYY DDOONN'TT YYOOUU EEVVEERRY FFFIINNIISSHH TTTTHHHEEEMM !!!!!???? THATS ALL I WANT TO KNOW |
Reviewed By: Jessi-chan On: July 21, 2003 17:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think this very interesting... I never really thought about Yukina liking Hiei.Wow! Keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: Arctic_Fox [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2003 15:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahahahahahahahaha! Poor Hiei! LOL. Update soon please!^^ |
Reviewed By: msm007 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2003 17:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have got to keep going, this fic is way too funny to be left undone. and the number of hilarious stuff that can go on till Yukina finds out Hiei is her brother, unless you up the rating and have incest. |
Reviewed By: Eirwen Lai [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2003 09:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
I liked it. I wish it was longer but if you make the next chapter longer I will forgive you. It's pretty funny. I like when Hiei asks what a boyfriend is... ^_^ |
Reviewed By: S.N.P. On: July 11, 2003 00:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is absolutely awesome! I've always thought Yukina and Hiei should be together. I really enjoyed the fic. Keep up the good work!!! |
Reviewed By: Silver Serpent On: July 10, 2003 20:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Regardless of this being your first fic you did very well! This is a very good plot and I like so far how your story is going. I'm curious, though. Does Hiei even realize that his sister loves him and it isn't exactly a sibling type of love? This could pose problems right? I'm looking forward to your next chapter! Hope you update soon! Great job! |
Reviewed By: AngelWings [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2003 14:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pleaseeee continue!!! This is a really good fic to be your first time!!! I'm on my knees in a 900 dollar suit here!!! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: sailormoonmarisa [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2003 10:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought your fanfic was very good and funny. Pleaz finish it. PPPPPPLLLLLLLLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ. |
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