| "Misunderstanding" Reviews/Comments [ 36 ] |
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Reviewed By: msm007 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2003 17:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have got to keep going, this fic is way too funny to be left undone. and the number of hilarious stuff that can go on till Yukina finds out Hiei is her brother, unless you up the rating and have incest. |
Reviewed By: Eirwen Lai [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2003 09:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
I liked it. I wish it was longer but if you make the next chapter longer I will forgive you. It's pretty funny. I like when Hiei asks what a boyfriend is... ^_^ |
Reviewed By: S.N.P. On: July 11, 2003 00:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is absolutely awesome! I've always thought Yukina and Hiei should be together. I really enjoyed the fic. Keep up the good work!!! |
Reviewed By: Silver Serpent On: July 10, 2003 20:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Regardless of this being your first fic you did very well! This is a very good plot and I like so far how your story is going. I'm curious, though. Does Hiei even realize that his sister loves him and it isn't exactly a sibling type of love? This could pose problems right? I'm looking forward to your next chapter! Hope you update soon! Great job! |
Reviewed By: AngelWings [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2003 14:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pleaseeee continue!!! This is a really good fic to be your first time!!! I'm on my knees in a 900 dollar suit here!!! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: sailormoonmarisa [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2003 10:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought your fanfic was very good and funny. Pleaz finish it. PPPPPPLLLLLLLLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ. |
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