| "Vacation's All I Ever Wanted!" Reviews/Comments [ 25 ] |
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Reviewed By: Midnight_001 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2003 23:03 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it !!!^__^ |
Reviewed By: MyNameIZBeTTy On: July 31, 2003 14:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
what do you get when you cross a bungee cord with an owl?.......................................... My Ass...LOL! |
Reviewed By: waterrain [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2003 13:58 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very good. |
Reviewed By: VEE On: July 28, 2003 04:49 CDT
Comment/Review:
I am going to bed now and I would just love to wake up to an update and/or an author's notes section! |
Reviewed By: GoD BLSA mericA On: July 28, 2003 04:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Jesus loves you, so you will not burn in the everlasting firery pits of hell! |
Reviewed By: Brandy On: July 28, 2003 04:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is really good. Update soon or I'll cry! |
Reviewed By: Vioden On: July 28, 2003 04:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think you got your reviews now can you please continue the story...PLEASE....*cries*....please Update soon! |
Reviewed By: BGH89-2672 On: July 28, 2003 04:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like your story, but could you have InuYasha start being a little more friendly with Kagome. Like, have him grope her and/or do something naughty to her(cuddle,kiss,hug,put arm around her,etc.) in front of her mother...on purpose, just to show off his restored dominance. I didn't like it when he threw Kagome into the water very much, although it was pretty funny. |
Reviewed By: VEE On: July 28, 2003 04:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think the full-demon Inuyasha things great. I just hope for a little fluff between Inu/Kag soon. Ex: Inuyasha gets bold with Kagome because she can't "sit" him anymore, and he could start acting more "friendly" towards Kagome instead of throwing her into the river he could have done something off the wall and downright "naughty". |
Reviewed By: kangel_21 On: July 23, 2003 12:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hi great story but how did inuyasha turn into a full demon because kagome took off his necklace. and will inuyasha and kagome ever go back to past again and see sango and the others. also if u could, could u make the chapters longer |
Reviewed By: drangede fanfic lover On: July 18, 2003 15:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
gr8 plez update sooooooon |
Reviewed By: Sinu-Yahsa On: July 12, 2003 02:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like it, update soon. |
Reviewed By: Paws On: July 22, 2003 18:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
*blinks* Now that was an intresting ending to this chapter! But what's with the 'extra markings' and 'different Kimono'?? Huh. Will he still be Sane?? Or Bloodthirsty? I'm hoping for Sane! |
Reviewed By: Paws On: July 22, 2003 18:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
Well thanks for her thoughts, but it was Rather on the SHORT end!?? Please update again soon! *puppy dog eyes* |
Reviewed By: tarigarma [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2003 20:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
well it is fine but i think you should do the chapters a little more biggers
the histiry is good continue like this and try to finish quickly |
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