| "One Night Of Pleasure" Reviews/Comments [ 51 ] |
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Reviewed By: veggiesprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2003 05:17 CDT
Comment/Review:
ooo you gotta update soon the chapters are short but thats ok i like your story and hope you keep up the good work
ja ne |
Reviewed By: EarthDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2003 23:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
intersting....very good i wanna read more please write more...please ...^-^ |
Reviewed By: da b On: July 12, 2003 22:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
how come sesshy and inu livei n the same apartment/house i mean if they hate eachother why do they live with each other?
could you make the story a lil more discriptive i was kinda of getting confused |
Reviewed By: Duke of spades On: July 12, 2003 16:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
hi uhm i think there is somehing wrong with your story because chapter 2 and up i can't read what ya wrote!!!!!and i wanna know what happens next!!!! it looks like this h*with a big square in the middle* i!!!!!! i could read it but it takes to long do decyripted it so wanna check that out!!! |
Reviewed By: ccsinjapan On: July 12, 2003 13:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oo!! i jsut loved it..its getting juicy..the characters are OOC but thats ok..it makes it more enjoyable..lol..well PLEEZ CONTINUE!!..its really good..i've read stuff about sess/kag/inu triangle things but nevre read one like this so its very orignal ^^ |
Reviewed By: Sesshomaru the Fallen Angel On: July 12, 2003 05:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes, I am also Fallen Angel from your other reveiws(I changed my name because Fallen Angel was taken by someoe else)Keep going with the fic. You're on a roll. |
Reviewed By: LiL_Devil On: July 11, 2003 15:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really likeds it i hope you update soon, really soon. Keep up the good work and i cant wait to read more. |
Reviewed By: Fallen Angel On: July 11, 2003 14:33 CDT
Comment/Review:
Please don't stop. It's a really good peice of writing.(Yes I know I spelled peice wrong) |
Reviewed By: Soudesuka_Shurikens On: July 11, 2003 13:53 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is very interesting. i can't wait to find out what happens next. is she going to go with sesshoumaru?
or will kagome and inuyasha stay together?....yet we all know sesshoumaru is the better.^_^ keep updating and keep on trucking. |
Reviewed By: Sai-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2003 13:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
Dude!! u've gotta update!!! and soon! cause i really like this fic! it's good. ^______^
Purple |
Reviewed By: Kilala36 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2003 12:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please continue. This is a great story |
Reviewed By: ccsinjapan On: July 11, 2003 11:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oo oo oo!! its oooooooooooo good!! pleez continue!! lol it was funni in sum parts.. lol ..and i'm still laffing!! ^^ pleez continue and update pleez!! i LUV it so far ^^ |
Reviewed By: veggiesprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2003 04:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
update please ^_^ |
Reviewed By: sessieluv2 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2003 01:22 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you have got to continue this fanfic it is great so far please please update!!! |
Reviewed By: Lil_sweet_azn_gurl977 On: July 18, 2003 21:44 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was great continue writing the story!!!!!!!!!!! |
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