| "My Light, Your Darkness" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] |
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Reviewed By: Drake Clawfang On: August 11, 2005 00:21 CDT
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Anzu aint a bitch, Yami aint gay, and this fic is a waste if time
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Reviewed By: murai-sakura [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2004 10:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! Do you have any idea how scary that really was? Man that was wicked...I loved the detail and stuff and all of the blood. BTW, if you like blood, you should try playing drakengard sometimes...wow, great fic, incredible!
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Reviewed By: Bluejay2099 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2004 20:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh no!! Anzu is evil and wants to kill everybody. Oh ya, that's original. God knows I havn't seen that over done a million times before. Other than the blatant misuse of our favorite charactoers emotions... this was actually a pretty good fic. AAlthough I am tired of people changing characters and all that bashing, I do see some writing skills in this work. t wouldn't really be fair to take my anger out on you like some random flamer, so I'll just say that it was well done even though I don't like this type of story. I don't want to discourage you, so I'll just say please try something different next time.
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Reviewed By: Dark dragon Ryoko On: November 08, 2003 00:29 CST
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UTADA HIKABUS????????!!!! IT'S UTADA HIKARU NO DUH CHECK THE SONG TRACK OF KIGDOM HEARTS IT SAY 'Simple and clean by Utada Hikaru'humph i cant belive no one told you that! and so far cept the miss spelling of my fav j-pop singer it's a good fic and please KILL THE ANNOYING WENCH!!!!
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Title: It's good
Reviewed By: HaXx [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2003 01:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked the end - very funny all that killing. but who did that Kuribo or Violet eyes? (The one who did must be involved with texas chainsaw massacre or play to much Gta3 vice city)
Good all round story |
Reviewed By: RedEyeDragon2478 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2003 20:09 CDT
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bring on the sequal! |
Reviewed By: cerridwen On: July 26, 2003 11:10 CDT
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That was...weird, to say the least. Wasn't expecting that ending at all. So in the sequel you're gonna resurrect Yami and Yugi or what? Well, looking forward to it! Like I said..weird, but good. I like your writing style. Simple and easy to read. Good job! |
Reviewed By: Melvin On: July 25, 2003 22:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
eww... the yoia bits were icky...
couldn't anzu just rape yami and yugi instead of going around dismembering people?
that's what misty did to ash when he dumped her in the pokemon fic, "can't accept" |
Reviewed By: dark On: July 22, 2003 15:00 CDT
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is this going somewhere and is anzu going to dye soon? |
Reviewed By: RedEyeDragon2478 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2003 19:39 CDT
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it does keep getting better every chapter! I support this fic all the way! keep at it! |
Reviewed By: fairette On: July 17, 2003 13:29 CDT
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ohhhh! I can't wait to see what Anzu is going to do at the party. ( I hate that biotch) How gruesome for her to kill her own parents, cut off their heads and put their body parts in the sink disposuer (sp?) *shivers* yuck! I like this fic and hope you had planned on continuing. |
Reviewed By: fairette On: July 14, 2003 11:13 CDT
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Oooooo! poison lollie pop, didn't notice at first. I hope yugi doesn' die. But I would like to find out in your next update that will be coming to mediaminer soon. thankies ^___^! |
Reviewed By: Catsy & Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2003 18:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Catsy: I LOVE U!!!!! But not in that kind of way... I love ur mind 4 coming up with this FICCIE!!!! kill the bitch, kill the bitch, kill her!!!!!!! Angel:Catsy calm down! 4 kami's sake! nice fic u got going here Violet Eyes and Kuribo-chan, but put lots of Yugi/Yami fluff, and kill Tea off... Everyone: KILL TEA! SHE IS THE WHORE OF ALL WHORES!!!!!KILL TEA FOR SHE IS A MOTHER FUCKING BITCH!!!*chant song over and over* Catsy: Please continue on with this fic, cause it is so wonderful!!!!all tea haters out there would love this fic, actually i think I will go spread the word! *runs off to spread word about, "My Light, Your Darkness". Angel:Please update this ficcie soon! anyways gotta go help Catsy spread the word about this Later. *runs off to spread word about this fic* Everyone: We LUV Kuribo-chan! We LUV Violet Eyes! We LUV Zoids Angel!!! WE WANT THEM TO KILL OFF TEA, FOR SHE IS A WHORE,and A BITCH!!!! WE hate her guts!!! WILL SHE EVER Go Insane!!!!! WE HOPE SO!!!!! WE LUV KURIBO-CHAN AND VIOLET EYES AND ZOIDS ANGEL!!!!!!! UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: fairette On: July 12, 2003 09:42 CDT
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Heyyyyyyyyy! You updated U.U thank you Loving the story, and the way you discribe Anzu's laugh as a cackle-ewww, not attractive. Hope your planning on continuing. ^___^! |
Reviewed By: Yaisa On: July 12, 2003 05:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
He he... i was wondering when Anzu was gonna go insane, after about a year of all those friendship speeches she must have fancied a change Great story though, i havn't read a ravenge fic yet, so it was different, although everybody seems to have Yugi and Yami doing... somthing together lol! You shud write some more ones wit Anzu going criminally insane, it's funny lol. anyway, Great story! 10 outta 10! Byeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee! Yaisi! go away, i'm trying to- Yaisi!!- '...' |
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