| "Inuyasha gets a bath" Reviews/Comments [ 22 ] |
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Reviewed By: draven's_enigma [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2007 22:12 CST
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your fic was not bad, but it was rushed. you have the potential to be a good author, butyou do need to make the storys a little longer. and for the people complaining about kagome having met seshoumaru, it is a fanfic and you can change it to however it suits you. people complain too damn much and never talk about the good, makes me more depressed than i already am. anyways keep writing with practice your fics can get even better.
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Reviewed By: Drake Clawfang On: August 22, 2005 11:06 CDT
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um, what was that? It was so rushed! Plus, Inu and Kags met Sess long before they met anyone else, even Shippo or Kikyo! He was the second villain of the show for crying out loud, so major plot hole there. It just seemed rushed and lame to me.
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Reviewed By: a On: February 11, 2005 19:56 CST
Comment/Review:
That was rushed
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Reviewed By: :( On: September 17, 2004 21:54 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was realy horrible, it sounded more like an outline for a story, then an actual story. everything was rushed, there were no details. overall - a very weak fic. also "lets all confess out love!" - everyone being that open & loving & forgiving - HA! It was a very fake story.
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Reviewed By: soscor On: May 25, 2004 01:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
The plot is great. But the story really wasn't good. I didn't enjoy it at all... the characters' personalities were changed... their actions and words were way off then what they really would have said.
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Reviewed By: KuramasGirl (not logged in) On: January 27, 2004 13:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 3 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
You obviously don't realize how much a rape affects your emotions and physical self. Nobody would forgive or smile about a rape. There is nothing funny or humorous about it. A rape affects a person's emotional status for years and years. Maybe you should either research a rape story, or maybe you could try to make it a little more sympathetic... now.... I did like the story. If it was longer or written better I think I would like it more.
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Reviewed By: ~Frost~bite~ On: January 22, 2004 17:50 CST
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this is a great story. update soon plz.
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Reviewed By: dragongirl101 On: December 13, 2003 11:38 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was great. it keep me on the edge of my seat. please write more to this chapter about Inu/Kag baby girl and what happens to her and Sess/Laryn to future to be child.
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Reviewed By: darkangelfirekitty [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2003 18:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^0ops forgot ^_~
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Reviewed By: darkangelfirekitty [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2003 18:36 CST
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grate fic i must say but fluffy RAPED kagome ...not good! inuyasha should have kicked that sobs ass .. as said by ..*looks up*: Yumiki-chan... and kagome still likeing him..crazy but it was still really great ..moew ^_~
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Reviewed By: Higurashi Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2003 10:20 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very cute story up-date soon =)
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Title: *frown**glare**mad*
Reviewed By: ?????????????? On: October 01, 2003 20:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOU ARE AN EVIL AUTHOR!!!!!! First,Kagome met Seshoumaru in early episodes. Second,Seshoumaru despises ALL humans! Last, Seshoumaru is NOT a man-whore. As previously stated, YOU ARE AN EVIL AUTHOR,you imbecile.
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Title: *frown**glare**mad*
Reviewed By: ?????????????? On: October 01, 2003 20:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOU ARE AN EVIL AUTHOR!!!!!! First,Kagome met Seshoumaru in early episodes. Second,Seshoumaru despises ALL humans! Last, Seshoumaru is NOT a man-whore. As previously stated, YOU ARE AN EVIL AUTHOR,you imbecile.
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Reviewed By: Yumiki-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2003 10:42 CDT
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Nice story, ecpt, hmmmmm... what was it? OH YEAH! Fulffy RAPED Kagome! I hope you have InuYasha Kick that S.O.B.'s ASS! But other wise good story! I hope you up-date soon so you con have InuYasha kick Fluffy's ASS!
Thax, Yumiki-chan |
Reviewed By: Julie K. On: July 23, 2003 10:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not too bad of a story! You started out with a very cute concept of Inuyasha getting a bath. Great lemon material. I was really just expecting it to be a PWP. You're not doing to bad a job of turning it into a more serious fic. The characters do seem a bit out of character though. You could also use a bit more description. I think things jump around too fast. It's nice to have the action move right along, but if it goes to fast it becomes hard to read or unrealistic. Also you're dialogue sequences are hard to follow. Watch your spacing and formatting of lines. It'll make it easier to understand who said which line. That aside; I really did enjoy it. It's fun, exciting and a bit quirky. I hope you post more soon! I'd love to see what happens. Oh... make the lemons longer! That's the best part! ^__^ |
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