| "Inuyasha gets a bath" Reviews/Comments [ 22 ] |
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Reviewed By: chuNKy LuVER On: July 15, 2003 02:34 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
ITs Great But it ended So fast. And PUPs? Already? In a Couple of Months? |
Reviewed By: kityasha [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2003 02:04 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
make more please? good job mate... no no not like that kind of mate in this story hehe don't mind me i'm a little hyper and i become....creeepy |
Reviewed By: Mikey B23 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2003 00:28 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Mikey B23 here!!!
Wow! Very nice work on this lemon! I can see this was prepared and well thought out! Extremly enjoyable and I LOVE the pairing! KIU, I look forward to reading more of your works!
Mikey B23 out!!!!!!!!!.................... |
Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2003 21:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
The formatting makes this piece very hard to read. A lot of people will see that it's all one paragraph and then discard it. Perhaps re-uploading it as a different kind of document would fix the problem.
I don't know if Inuyasha would be that articulate about his feelings even once he'd decided to express them. And the jump from thinking about each other to thinking about a baby is a bit jarring.
Old subject matter, but the style and images are pretty good. |
Reviewed By: Kanpeki [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2003 07:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was a very good fic. Grammar was a bit off and the idea has been done before but all in all it was great. |
Reviewed By: Guns On: July 12, 2003 05:13 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please Write more. This is too good not to continue. Well if you don't i will just have to imagine what would happen....scary thought. This was a good fic and i hope you continue to write |
Reviewed By: Sesshomaru the Fallen Angel On: July 12, 2003 04:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Keep writing! How does it turn out? |
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