Reviewed By: Yendtra On: July 13, 2003 23:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I practically smiled through the whole story!! It was great especially since it was based on my fav character HIEI!!! You are a great writter and I don't know why but while reading your story you made me think of my Friend Madison aka Jessica, I was just reading, and it came to mind at the very beginning. Some of my ideas come from the shower but mostly when I'm in my room making episodes up *cough*.
The only thing that made me twitch yet laugh was Hiei being the chichiue and hahaue. Me being a girl Hiei fan - Lets not think nasty.
Keep up the writing don't change its unique-ness.
Buh-Bye |
