| "Pushing You Away" Reviews/Comments [ 25 ] |
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Reviewed By: Lizzie On: July 18, 2003 12:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please write more! And DO NOT let Kagome get to hurt! I actually like Sess/Kag pairings.
~~Lizzie |
Reviewed By: rox On: July 18, 2003 00:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey this is really good, please continue, can't wait for you're update |
Reviewed By: Lutra On: July 17, 2003 10:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ohh...I'd like to know what happens next...and yeah I was wondering about the two arm thing too. |
Reviewed By: misty On: July 16, 2003 17:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
keep it up the great work. |
Reviewed By: Me On: July 15, 2003 22:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
Good, so far. Some spelling errors. My only confusion is: how many arms does Sesshoumaru have in your story? He carries her princess-style. Wouldn't that require 2 arms? Doesn't he have only one? |
Reviewed By: Mershu On: July 15, 2003 18:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yea! That was awesomez! Great job! I love the jealousy factor!
Whoo!
Love Ya!
Lil'Mershu-chan |
Reviewed By: Kias On: July 14, 2003 22:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
I think u should keep on going with the story its getting good |
Reviewed By: Pan On: July 14, 2003 16:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
Don't you dare put up Lemon next chapter! Kagome and Sesshoumaru! The Only words I can said is EWWW, This is Inu/Kag, Okay? If you put sess/kag next chapter, you sure have to live with kikyou in hell! |
Reviewed By: Rei-Rei On: July 14, 2003 15:00 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
here i go again reviewing ur fic!! ^_^ i really hope sesshomaru dont get TOO far wit kagome...that would just b so sad! >. |
Reviewed By: Elizabeth On: July 14, 2003 14:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love your style of writing, i absolutly suck at spelling, so how would i know how your spelling is?i admire your originality and creativity, your fic is defently somthing i couldn't come up with, so i give you a ten. it couldnt be better.:)
would there be anyway you could make your chapters longer? they're so short, and i hate cliff hangers.but then again, who doesnt? |
Reviewed By: Katie On: July 14, 2003 02:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
I'm new so i don't know about the whole 1-10 rating thing so i wont fill that out, but i really enjoied your fic! :) It's very good! You area very good writer. |
Reviewed By: Feared On: July 14, 2003 01:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
I need to know more!!! pleaswe update this is really good ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Rei-Rei On: July 14, 2003 01:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
u gotta update soon!! i wanna kno wut happens next!! i cant believe u would make him do that to her lolz...i started crying XD it was just so sad! pleeeeease update soon! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Inu+Kag 4 ever!! On: July 19, 2003 16:30 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
no!! u betta not make sesshomaru rape kagome!! thas bad!! ur fic rox but i would hate to see kagome get raped by '¬_¬ sesshomaru! i despise Sess/kag anything! but imma keep readin ur fic cuz its cool. =D |
Reviewed By: Hotaru1421 On: July 15, 2003 12:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay!Sesshy!Write more PLEASE!!!!!!!!!! |
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