| "Gundam Day Care" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
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Reviewed By: gwing fan On: August 01, 2003 08:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
i think something should have gone wrong because saying something at the wrong time just isnt any good try doing something like pricilla running up to yuy or duo and tripping over and breaking her leg or something so the wedding had to be prospond
and then one of them has an affair or has second thoughts about the wedding and doent turn up. |
Reviewed By: wren_legacy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2003 00:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
awwww! davids little cuddle bug. how sweet! sorry it short, glad u update so often! ^_~ tata! |
Reviewed By: wren_legacy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2003 18:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
Dang! I think i was drooling too........ yum yum eatum up! *devious twinkle* Wufei had another nosebleed and Quatre fainted! LOL! i love this. Write more when u can, I'll be here. till then! ^_~ |
Reviewed By: wren_legacy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2003 00:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
flames? are u kidding me? that was cute! and i can't wait to see how Duo makes Wufei's nosebleed! * gleeful look * hope Wufei gets some sort of a girl in here and it would be awsome if u wrote a story about the kids when ur done wit this...... and i'm getting head of my self. Hopefully your muse will hit u with the large inspiration thingy of its choice. and nevermind, inside joke. but really... u have to continue! this is great! update soon! Tata! ^_~ |
Reviewed By: Mara-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2003 20:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
*happy sigh* and now this after that completely adorable last chapter, that was awesome. i can't wait to see how duo makes wuffie's nose bleed tomorrow. heee i love this fic.
Mara |
Reviewed By: wren_legacy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2003 10:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
I thought the thing with David and Prisilla was cute! And yes, Wufei does, definately, need some lovin. Really like the way this is goin and can't wait for more! ;P I like stories about Wu-chan! I'm such a dork....... *sighs and shakes head* Oh well! This is funny too! Verrry good! I'll be waiting for the rest! Tata! |
Reviewed By: Riley Maxwell [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2003 14:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG that is sssoooo cute! David must have a thing for Priscilla! I wonder if Tro and Quat's kids will get gundam too? Keep writing this is a good story! Hook Wuffie up with someone so he doesn't feel so lonely...or insane. |
Reviewed By: wren_legacy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2003 11:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ahhhhh! i love it! Talkative heero and trowa and their kids! Beyond cool! Its just.... this fic is so cute! ^_^ I just can't help but get excited! Update soon! This is such a great fic and I can't wait to see where it goes! Keep it up! Happywriting! ^_~ |
Reviewed By: Mara-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2003 10:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
awwwww, that's so cute!!!!! you kno i never did like the pregger fics, where duo and heero have a baby, but this one is cool, focusing more on the having a child aspect. i think you should write more with priscilla and david as active characters, it'd be really interesting to read about the extent of her skills... also, what's going to happen to wuffie? he needs to be happy! and are you going to write anythign that reinforces duo and heero's relationship? and how are you going to write the timeline for this? are you going to write it up til priscilla is old enough to get duo's deathscythe? so many questions!
Mara |
Reviewed By: PreventerPixie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2003 19:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
i like it! please continue
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Reviewed By: Brenda On: July 19, 2003 16:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is so sweet! I like what you have done with Heero! |
Reviewed By: Duo no Baka On: July 15, 2003 13:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was very, very cute pleace continue!! |
Reviewed By: kirara On: July 15, 2003 14:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loooove this fic. it's sooooo cute and funny ^_^ please write more and don't leave this fic unfinished!!! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Mara-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2003 19:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
omg!!!!!!!! that chapter was so cute!! *melts* that is better than any fluff i've ever read ever! wow hehe that was just plain adorable! i loved it!
Mara
ps anyone who flames you over this is just plain stupid, its a story, and a cute one at that, its not like they're trying to have sex or something... its just adorable! |
Reviewed By: Kirara On: July 27, 2003 11:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH MY GAWD!!*O* This fic has improved so much sense the last time I reviewed. I think David and Priscilla are soooo CUTE together! ^_^ You've got to get Wufei his own "cuddle bug" because everyone else has one, heck, even the kids.
Please, update soon. I LOOOOOVE this fic. ^_^ |
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