| "The Bermuda Island" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] |
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Reviewed By: An idiot On: July 22, 2003 16:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
Well, if you don't end it up with Ash/May together, then why not have an Ash/May/Misty type relationship? I'm only putting that thought out there because I want to see something with Ash and May together.
Why did you also put up two chapter 2's? |
Reviewed By: unknown On: July 21, 2003 21:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHY DID YOU STOP WRITE MORE ITS GETTING GOOD |
Reviewed By: Pure Knight On: July 21, 2003 18:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
you accidently put chapt. 2 up two times but ya need more Ash/May |
Reviewed By: Pure Knight On: July 15, 2003 20:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
not bad, but ya need more may and ash hentai/romance fics |
Reviewed By: An idiot On: July 18, 2003 22:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
I'm interested in the Ash/May pairing. I haven't seen a fic where they get to it. But I would like to see one. I guess Misty and Brock would be interesting as well as Gary and Whitney. Please get the next scene up soon. |
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