| "Memories Should be Treasured" Reviews/Comments [ 42 ] |
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Reviewed By: Forest Green On: July 30, 2003 18:38 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved the original and I love this one,,, PLEASE don't let Keith rape Yugi PLEASE!! and does Duel Monsters fin into the story anymore or was that a one time thing on Yugi's computer?
UPDATE!! > ‡ < Shissy the Fishey!! |
Reviewed By: cerridwen On: July 26, 2003 11:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
Very good! Interesting story so far. I'm glad that you continued "Changing Makes a Difference". Definitely keep going! |
Reviewed By: Hermeny On: July 26, 2003 01:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fantastic story! I love how the plots are so moving. Just one request though: Please please please don't let Keith rape Yugi? I know that it might be essential to your plot, but some stories are just ruined by something like that. Plus, Yugi a sweet kid; something like that shouldn't happen to him. Other then that, I have no complaints.
P.S. Yami's sister is really cute! |
Reviewed By: XxNeko_YoukaixX On: July 24, 2003 17:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HEY!! UPDATE ALREADY I WANY TO KNOW WHATS GOING TO HAPPEN NEXT!!!! O & Keith better stay the hell away from Yugi & i also hope that Yami's mom finds out on what Keith has been up to & gets his ass in jail for rape & Yami, Yugi, Yami's mom & baby sister can live a happy life without fear. |
Reviewed By: super_JM [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2003 21:56 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
cool you go on with the story. yay. very cool. can't wait for the next chapter |
Reviewed By: Sumomo [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2003 15:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
cool^^ like i've said in many of my reviews to other people, I only review the good fictions, so that means you're writing a great ficy here^^
~Sumomo~ |
Reviewed By: polly On: July 16, 2003 17:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wow! Sequel to "Changing Makes a Difference" I loved that story so shway. This story is gonna be good, I can already tell. I mean when you put a horny Keith, overprotective Yami, and a shy and easy Yugi, the results are bounded to be good ya know so I hope you update soon. smiles ^_____________^ |
Reviewed By: sailor moon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2003 11:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
hi again, thanks once more for fixing it. I thoughtI might mntion it since my computer was giving me problems last night as well. But now that I have had a chanc to read the chapte, I absultly love it. I also can't wait for chapter two. I know this isgoing to bea great storry ust like changing makes a differance. *smiles*keep it up, you are a great writter. |
Reviewed By: Nicky On: July 16, 2003 01:18 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the start of another great story. I really enjoyed your first one and can't wait to see where this goes. Keep writing. |
Reviewed By: ilpalazzo [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2003 21:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
Uh, yeah. This didn't upload correctly or something... |
Reviewed By: sailor moon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2003 21:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
hey tere its me Sailor Moon, I just wanted to let ou know that this chaptr didn' come out al that well and may...need to be updated and fixed up a bit, maybe uplad it in a different fileformat |
Reviewed By: Galenchia On: July 17, 2003 20:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this fanfic, in addition to it's first story. ^^ Very good, and please continue! |
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