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Reviewed By: Phoebemoon [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2004 17:32 CST
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that was a good lemon .. very quick and to the point .. but wow what he did .. jeesh! MEan mean makes me wonder if they will get back together. I am still wondering what you have planned for the sword and what sango said in an earlier chappie .. hmm .. cant wait!
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Reviewed By: *Tenshi* On: February 26, 2004 15:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awsome story. But I still dislike Sesshoumaru for his bossyness. What if he didn't find out that Kagome was a virgin, would he realize that he loved her? I can't believe how cruel he was to her.
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Title: Chapter 34
Reviewed By: jschu25(nli) On: February 26, 2004 13:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter, even the lemon. Sesshoumaru was the only one that messed it up. I don't think I can add anything that the reviewers before me haven't said, except Sesshoumaru deserves to be castrated after this last chapter. I hope Silver feels better. ~_~ jschu25
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Title: NUUUU!
Reviewed By: Corisu Li [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2004 12:27 CST
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*bursts into hysterical tears* SESSHOU!!!! GRRRR.... *suddenly smiles serenely* Hmph. Well, SF, nice chapter. I had to book it over here from FF.net, but ah, well. 'Tis the price we must pay for good fanfiction. And there's no point in being mad at Sesshou... I mean, he's going to somehow make it all better, right? RIGHT? Hmph... *wiggles nose and Sesshou is suddenly suspended over a vat of Rabid Fangirls* REPENT!!! Eheh. But... great job, SF-sama! Can't wait until the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Avonnalay-Ariemay On: February 26, 2004 10:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, I just got done reading this version of the story (I caught ff.net's first) and I just have to tell ya, that I feel like sticking Sesshy in the middle of a pit of vipers right now!! How could he do that?! **Holds up my pet snake and dangles it over Sesshy's head -who is for the moment conveninetly tied to a chair-** MEN!!! UGH!!! I SWEAR THEY ARE THE MOST APATHETIC, UNCARING, EGOTISTICAL, SELF CENTERED, DEVIOUS CREATURES THAT WE HAVE THE UNFORTUNATE JOB TO DEAL WITH ON PLANET EARTH!! (Oh, and sorry to any guys that might be reading this. **blushes profusely** Ya'll aren't all alike, but it's guys who have a mindset like Sesshy that I would just love to throw off a cliff somewhere!) Anyway, I can't wait for the next chapter. Please hurry, you've got me in an immense amount of anticipation. Later, A.A.
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Reviewed By: voleur du coeur On: February 26, 2004 10:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
How in the bloody hell could you leave us hanging like this!!??? I want to know if she fries his sorry ass!!?? (Oops, *blushes profusely* sorry about the vulgarity. You've just got me wound up here. ^.^) So, is Sesshy going to get a good beating from Kagome for doing that to her? One more question though, you said earlier that their actual 'mating' was going to be some what painful. Are they considered 'mated' now, or just lovers? Cause it seems to me like Sesshy-dear is acting like an overprotective mate. (Just my thoughts. Sorry if they're off the wall.) Anyway, I absolutely love this story and cannot wait to read more of it. Later, VDC
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Title: stupid sess
Reviewed By: BelleDayNight (not signed in) On: February 26, 2004 08:29 CST
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It was really well written! I so wanna slap the tar outta Sesshoumaru though! He always has to screw things up w/ his over possessiveness. Oh no! The sword made out of her love returned to her. That's horrible! How in the world will he redeem himself? This is like the what fifth time he has screwed up? You're doing a marvelous job!
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Reviewed By: IsisTheEgyptianGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2004 05:46 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Isis: *is chasing Sesshoumaru around the room* You arrogant, pompus, ass!!! Miroku: *is covering Shippo's ears as the insults get worse* Sesshoumaru: *dodges a blast of reddish yellow magic* Don't blame me!!! Isis: *eyes go yellow (what happens when her youkai blood starts to take control)* Whatever!! How could you!!? *she shoots more magic at him* You obviously don't know shit about women!!! I swear!!! You called her your whore!!!! *shoots another bolt of reddish yellow magic at him* Inu: What happens if that magic hits him? Kagome: Spontaneous combustion mean anything to you? Inu: Huh? Sango: He'll burst into flames. Inu: Oh... Isis: *snarls then takes two pieces of paper out of her pocket and manages to slap one on Sesshoumaru's back and then he freezes in mid run* There! Now, one more... *slaps the seal on his mouth* There we go! Miroku: You done yet? Isis: *dusts off her hands* Not even close. I'll get him later. Now then, *turns to SF* don't worry, I'm not mad at you. Just Mr. Evil arrogant man over here. *points at a frozen Sesshou* So, what I wanted to say was, this was very well written. I mean, we knew it was coming, but I really didn't expect him to be so harsh and mean about it. *glare at frozen taiyoukai* I know as well as the next person that your characters do not do what you want no matter what. Also, the lemon was good. Better then what I can write... Anyway, please update soon, I'm eager to see how this will be fixed. But, I'm not sure if it can be. I mean, if it was me and Sesshou did that, well... SPONTANIOUS COMBUSTION!! Ahem, hehe. Anyways, see you next time SF. *turns back to Sesshou* O.k. Mr. Arrogant-No-Nothing-About-Women-Prince-Frosty, I'm gonna teach you a lesson about how you treat women and how to listen when your heart tells you something! *smiles at everyone then drags him away*
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Reviewed By: Fangboy On: February 26, 2004 02:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gah. Love the fic, hate the end of the chapter. YOU'RE SUCH A MEANIE!!! HOW COULD YOU DO THAT?! Sniff...I hope they reconsole. Poor Kagome, if a guy does that to me, I'd probably react worse tho'. ;_;
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Reviewed By: 2 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2004 01:46 CST
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2004 22:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. Talk about a chapter. I didn't think the lemon was that bad. But god was Sess an ass or what. He screwed up major. Can't wait to see how you get him out of it.
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Reviewed By: cutie_pie_2101_1012(2 lazy 2 sign in) On: February 25, 2004 20:36 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thats sad they hav sex (p.s i luved the lemon) she wakes up he tells her that she cant leave she has to quit her job just to be his whore and in the end he finds out she's a vergin and is sad because he treated her so badly i mean really if i had sex with a guy and all of a sudden he told me i was going to be his sex slave 4ever i'd try and get far far away from the bastard. but i cant believe this she sleeps with him and he becomes a cold hearted bastard again that is so mean r u gonna hav them get back 2gether again because if u do u should make him beg for forgivness just for being an ass and make him get on his hands a knees and beg her to come back to him even tho she'll proboally think it's an act or something to lure her back to going with him. and also can u please update soon this chapter was really good and i cried a tear and u'd better take that as an honor because i'm a goth and i barily ever cry so any ways update really really soon because it's got me on the edge of my seat just thinkin about wat can happen next
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Reviewed By: Kizna Kyouru [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2004 18:28 CST
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ahh love it love it love it! what am i babbling about i love all of your work, and how each time ive read something by you Sesshomaru gets Kagome, cause Sesshomaru is just so god damned cute! anyways, please update sooness!
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Reviewed By: RED HAT On: February 25, 2004 17:34 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I want to beat Sess's ass for treating Kagome so bad. Sess has hit the shit list with his actions in this story and I don't know how he's ever gonna change this!! I could NEVER trust him now! Kagome doesn't seem that forgiving in this story because he wronged her to many times don't ya think?? But if they do make it back together make Sess beg for her forgiveness....PLEASSSEEEE!
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Reviewed By: Lunabelle On: February 25, 2004 15:38 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry to hear that Silver is sick, but you did really good at writing the lemon. Why is Sesshoumaru still being a jerk? I thought everything was going to end happy, then he had to blow it by reverting back to his stick-up-the-ass youkai self. Thank goodness Kagome is not locked up anymore, however, I still do hope for the happy ending. This story has me sucked in like the soap operas suck in the girls I work with. Contiune writing and I will continue to enjoy.
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