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Reviewed By: fluffy'slova4life [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2004 20:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
CiCi: hi ya! yes i have already written a lemon..{::blush::} very sad i know! but if this little shit {::pokes JD::} hadn't ratted me out i wouldn't be embarassed! JD: {::snickers::} you know your happy. any way,- CiCi: hmpf! i hate it when she does that! takes over my friggin' review! JD: oh stop whining! anyway, yes we thought- CiCi: ooooh no you don't! {::starts pushing JD out of studio::} out out out out OUT! my review back off! {::pushs JD out of studio::} alrighty then. i diffently LOVED this chapter. it's just what i expected... which is a good thing. i like how kagome comes up with the ofuda! haha! i thought for a sec she'd just summon miro-chan!! haha! yes she and sessie have calmed down a bit..{::blush again::} yea my cleaning crew is kinda pissed...to much empty chip bags and trash from where we were hiding out...eh...heh. Sessho: so that's why i couldn't find you! that makes since then... CiCi: yea yea... INu-chan: haha, did you hear about her ear? haha! CiCi: {::growls::} yes i did! i know it hurts so leave her alone about it! Inu-chan: why have you done it before? CiCi: {::growls::} you know what? {::clamps thumb and index finger on inu's right ear::} Inu-chan: ow ow ow ow ow ow ow {::starts sliding down as CiCi's hand pulls him down::} CiCi: say what now? Inu-chan: yes ma'm.
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Reviewed By: *Nagasaki On: March 31, 2004 18:09 CST
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broken? how is that possible? i loved the chapter and i can't wait until your next one! why does he look tired and old*whispers* altough he really is old!
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Reviewed By: Lunabelle On: March 31, 2004 18:00 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sesshy broken! Wonder if we can piece him back together with Duck-Tape? (laughing while others stare at her as if has lost her mind) On a serious note, LOVE IT! Very harm warming, and googey centered. Though the wait was un-nerving, the resulted chapter was excellent. Sesshy got called a girl! HAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Poor Sesshy. Even the neighbor got into the act. Very funny, very good chapter, excellent story. Awaiting the next one.
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Reviewed By: IsisTheEgyptianGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2004 16:43 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Isis: Gah! Inu: Huh?? Isis: Just... GAH!!! *muttering* Evil SF making a cliffie like that... *pauses then* SHAME!!! Sesshou: *is reading* What do you mean this Sesshoumaru is... broken??! Isis: We don't know. That's why it's called a cliffie a.k.a. Cliff Hanger!! *sigh* Please oh please update!! I wanna know how it ends!! Ja ne.
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Reviewed By: Fenikkusu Ice (not signed in) On: March 31, 2004 16:00 CST
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Hey cool! Great chapter as usual! Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Kitsune_Bi [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2004 15:00 CST
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OMG WHAT HAPPENED!!!! SESSHOU? KAGOME? AHHHHHHH!!!! NOOOOO!!!! ....needless to say, AWESOME chapter. snarf.
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Title: 1
Reviewed By: 2 On: March 31, 2004 10:40 CST
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Title: You Have the Right To remain Silent.....lol
Reviewed By: Stormy Nights Rainy Days [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2004 18:47 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry I have never written a lemon ever at all. So I gots a question how old are you ppl any way? You don't gotta awnser just curious....Are you related once again don't gotta awnser....Any way kool chap hahaha Inu is very.......waizu. Wise.......OMG HE IS WISE?????-_-U
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Title: Awesome
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2004 20:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story. Update soon. Can't wait to see how you bring Sesshomaru and Kagome back together.
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Reviewed By: lady scorpio On: March 25, 2004 22:24 CST
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i would really love to smack the "great taiyoukai" upside his royal head! stupid youkai! what a dumbass...i luv this story, keep it up! update soon 'cause i want to see if mr. stoopid can get kag back.
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Title: Yes!!
Reviewed By: duchess(duchesscarml, to lazy to login) On: March 25, 2004 01:16 CST
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I know I haven't wrote a review... in loooong time, but I've been with you all the way!! Now, I love this chapter! Its nice to see someone else who believes Inu-chan is NOT as stupid as he is made out to be in the anime... just a tad on the clueless side most times...lol. I have a question: What did Katrina's brother do to Inuyasha (or was it her sister? need to go back and check that)?? Is he a full youkai now? Tell me!! Please... I'm begging here! I'll give you chocolate... ~*Duchess
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Reviewed By: Amreld On: March 24, 2004 18:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
heh. thanks. ^^ I feel like I alreayd reviewed this chapter....btu didn't read the last part. Hm. Weird. Well, anyway....this was awesome! I love ti when people make things sad or devastating. it puts in a twist. I posted some fanart for my staory. Its Kaggy in her demon form. ^~ in my story anyway. It was trhe first thing I drew in my new sketch book. And the first good thing I drew EVER! Cool ne? I also have my website published, though its still under construction. Wanna see? http://the-f0rsaken.tripod.com/reapersandroses/index.html just copy and paste in your address bar. It is dedicated to vampires, fanfiction, and heavy metal. ^^ *grin* Must go! Ja ne! Amreld
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Title: to quote Sango
Reviewed By: FD On: March 23, 2004 00:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HOT SHIT ON A PLATE!!!! THIS IS THE ALL TIME BEST STORY I HAVE EVER READ!!!!! NO WAIT IS BETTER THEN THE BEST!!! i cant wait to read more please update soon ^_^_^_^_^_^
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Reviewed By: Nagasaki [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2004 18:34 CST
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I LOVED IT! i can't wait until your next chapter! will kagome talk to him?
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Reviewed By: Conqueror_Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2004 16:35 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY Inuyasha! He got Sesshy to see the light...in a sense, but who cares he's going to apologize. Anyway as you can see I love the new chappie, why wouldn't I? I are such a great writer. I await the next chapter, later!
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