| "My Life: Malik's Story" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
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Reviewed By: Lady Asia On: October 12, 2003 21:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
KEEP ON WRITTING. BUT!YOU!MUST!LET!MALIK!LIVE!!!! HE CAN NOT DIE. HE JUST WANTED A FRIEND. HHHHHHEEEE MMMMUUUUUSSSSTTTT LLLLIIIIVVVVEEEE. OR I WILL HUNT YOU DOWN AND KILL YOU WITH MY OWN FANGS. DON'T UNDERESTAMATE A DEMON OF THE WEST LANDS. A FULL DEMON DOG IS NOT ONE TO BE TAKEN LIGHTLY. ~Lady Asia~
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Reviewed By: amandakennedy On: September 21, 2003 18:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's soooooo good!!!!
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Reviewed By: F_D_C2003 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2003 17:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
T_T
*sniff sniff*
thats so sad i feel srry 4 him poor malik
good stary though im actually crying and me of all people!!!!! |
Reviewed By: bebe On: September 06, 2003 23:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
o.o you..... you killed malik.......*cries* (this fic actually made me crie! i'm not lying!) this is such a sad fic! i think i still might be cryting! poor malik! he shoulden't have jumped!...... you should make another chapter.... tell what happens to the gang after he's dead.... tell isis's reaction to the news.... |
Reviewed By: Yami_Within On: July 23, 2003 17:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
This was a wonderful story. You did so well in showing Malik's pain and how he tried to tough it out. The emptiness he felt was so tangible I hurt along with him. One note, however, the Tea bashing distracted from the story and the personal emotional feeling you were trying to build. Keep writing, you are very good at transmitting emotions. |
Reviewed By: ssjgoddessChico [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2003 17:37 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg! That was so sad! Poor Malik.....Lol, I loved how you bashed Tea`...I can't stand her! |
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