| "Forbidden God" Reviews/Comments [ 18 ] |
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Reviewed By: bonnieginger4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2003 10:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice fic. The only thing I can really see bad about the actual story line is that it is YAOI. I just don't think Yami's and Hikari's should be together. It's like loving yourself, even more so with Malik and Yami Malik. As far as I know, Y. Malik was created FROM Malik and wasn't in the M. Rod (that sounded SO wrong...) At least Bakura and Yami had past lives -_- Other than that, your story line is good but you should ask one of your friends to beta read it... I could if you'd like... |
Reviewed By: chibbiusa On: August 02, 2003 11:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this fic is really tight and seriuosly funny cant wait for the next chapter!
later! ^__^ |
Reviewed By: anime magic millennia On: July 21, 2003 21:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
This fic is so funny!^_^ Especially when Yugi is sugar high!Please write the next chapter soon! |
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