| "Forbidden God" Reviews/Comments [ 18 ] |
| Pages (2): [ « < 1 2 ] |
Reviewed By: ying93 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2004 08:05 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
haha update soon it rocks!
|
Title: How could You?
Reviewed By: Ldypebsaby [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2004 07:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very interesting plot I like where this is going, only a few things to say, a little spelling here and there is a little off. Also *GRRRR* you have got to update more often, come on!!!!
|
Reviewed By: Maruken On: May 15, 2004 20:17 CDT
Comment/Review:
That was GREAT!! PERVERTED BIRD!! Was it a Hippogriff? I'm just guessing. Can there be SOME Mariku/Ryou? PLEASE?!! I'm the ULTIMATE FANGIRL OF Mariku/Ryou!!!! PLEASE!! By the way, I LOVE Ryou's attitude!
|
Reviewed By: Amora Laflour [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2004 19:30 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
is it all right that i reviewed two times in a row? *looks around carefully* good. That was a great chapter i loved it ^_^
|
Reviewed By: Amora Laflour [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2004 21:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
Past five reviews so UPDATE!
|
Reviewed By: Technical Dragon On: January 03, 2004 03:03 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Malik/Ymariku They r so good 2gether. Newayz Update.
|
Reviewed By: Almighty Neko-chan On: December 27, 2003 01:54 CST
Comment/Review:
Well... ahem... I have a few things to say... I've only read the first chapter, and I've already noticed some mistakes. You REALLY need to improve your grammar. I'm sorry, but it's horrible. Also, Domino City is in Japan, not America. At least it SHOULD be. If you watch the dubbed version (which I must say is EXTREMELY idiotic), it says it's in America.... Stupid dubbers... they screwed the show up.... Anyhooble... You ought to go over your chapters and correct spelling and grammar. That way, people might actually be able to read this without thinking you're braindead. Ja ne. ~Almighty Neko-chan~
|
Reviewed By: Nakerti On: November 16, 2003 17:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOU MUST PAIR HIM WITH MALIK!!!THEY BELONG TOGETHER!!WHY DON'T YOU BAKA PEOPLE SEE THAT?!!
|
Reviewed By: Silver M On: September 18, 2003 05:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is very good please write more now. Oooor as
soon as you can.
silver moon |
Title: ....?
Reviewed By: Thy name is Moi On: September 15, 2003 21:04 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Comment/Review:
......I haven't really finished reading the first chapter but...I can't really understand what's happening. I get that Yami no Ryou wanted his bloody meat, and the postal owl wanted it too, and he stabbed it, but....that's about all I got. What about the owl? And, Domino City is in Japan. I don't know where you got it was in America, but...it's not. I'm sorry if I sound bitchy, but, it's my time of the month and for some reason I always seem to have to bitch about things to people on these days...And you just got chosen. But anyway, the ancient spirits of the Sennen Items, they're NOT 5,000 years old....they're 3,000. Anf there's only two spirits residing in two items. The Puzzle and the Ring. And again, the whole, Domino City America thing....It says in the manga that's it's in Japan. And I honestly don't think that they would have Japanese names and have signs written in Kanji if it was America. *sighs* Gomennasai again for being a complete and utter bitch but...I have to rant....it's in my blood to. And I'm stuck on the whole America/Japan thing...but, I will try to repint by saying it's YOUR fanfic. You may do whatever you want. Fanfics are whatever the person wants to make happen, it will happen. I'm tired right now, and will try again at reading this tomorrow. That is all.
~Cecilia |
Reviewed By: danya On: August 25, 2003 06:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well that was different. It was really funny, the only thing I didn't like was you making Yugi a little kid.....
Anyways you said you would update as soon as you got 5 reviews, so here it is the 5th review.
Can't wait to see what happens! |
Reviewed By: Immrotal_hunter [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2003 20:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
WTF R U DOING???? IT"S GOOD BUT...WHAT R U DOING @ MALIK?!?!? |
Reviewed By: bonnieginger4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2003 10:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice fic. The only thing I can really see bad about the actual story line is that it is YAOI. I just don't think Yami's and Hikari's should be together. It's like loving yourself, even more so with Malik and Yami Malik. As far as I know, Y. Malik was created FROM Malik and wasn't in the M. Rod (that sounded SO wrong...) At least Bakura and Yami had past lives -_- Other than that, your story line is good but you should ask one of your friends to beta read it... I could if you'd like... |
Reviewed By: chibbiusa On: August 02, 2003 11:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this fic is really tight and seriuosly funny cant wait for the next chapter!
later! ^__^ |
Reviewed By: anime magic millennia On: July 21, 2003 21:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
This fic is so funny!^_^ Especially when Yugi is sugar high!Please write the next chapter soon! |
| Pages (2): [ « < 1 2 ] |
