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Title: *Drools*
Reviewed By: lovin_sesshomaru_isnteasy [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2003 19:33 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If you don't update faster I'm going to kill myself!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AGH! How does he know! What is Inu Yasha going to do?!?!?!?!?! You are making my sane-less quest even more insane!!! *screams and passes out*
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Title: OH MY GOD
Reviewed By: kwiksilver [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2003 22:07 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
By all the gods and all the circles of hell i demend that you write ore on your story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!! I love it! I can't believe tha cliff hanger that you just left me with on chapter 11!!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update soon!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!
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Reviewed By: chocodips On: December 16, 2003 04:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
Happy Birthday!!! Season's Greetings!!! Hope you can UPDATE soon. That's quite a cliffhanger there... When will the big battle be? with Naraku I mean. i really liked your story. Hope you make your next chapterssss longer. ^_^
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Reviewed By: bloodroseblade [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2003 08:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kudos to you for a great chapter and story!! I love this story and I can't wait for it to be updated. Please update soon...
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Reviewed By: gothic vampire On: December 09, 2003 16:24 CST
Comment/Review:
i really like your story ever since i whatched pirates of the caribean i have been obsessed with pirates. why i dont know but anyway update soon ^_^
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Reviewed By: Relix On: December 08, 2003 16:52 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Are planning to update soon?
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Reviewed By: inu'slover On: December 04, 2003 19:29 CST
Comment/Review:
While it is true that the story line is brilliant and you have a wonderful talent with cliff's you need to update my dear. I understand that it is hard to write a story, and that it is also hard to update often when there are other things like school to pay attention too.. but sadly those are things you have to deal with now that you have an extra responibility to your readers..... I am not saying this to try and say keep with it or give up, because i really really like this plot and setting.... the characters are great and all .... but it does get a little agrivating when it seems to take forever of the next chapter.... now i'm not saying that you should update every day.... though that would be nice... maybe if you come up with a schedual and update .... once every three days or any number ... just that the number is consistant ... your reader's will love it because if they know what days to be expecting the new chapter they wont be waisting their time to see if you have updated yet, and you wont be waisting your time reading evil reviews and worrying about how long it has been sense you last updated..... a deffinite day schedual will make it so that you can schedual in your writing with the rest of your life and it will be a little less stressful.... LOVE THE STORY .... PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!.....
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Reviewed By: Demonic Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2003 14:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like you story alot u gotta hurry up and write more!!!!!!!!
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Title: Well I think
Reviewed By: jprincess16 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2003 16:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoy the story very much but I really need to know what happens next please update soon. Until then good job
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Reviewed By: Inu'slover On: December 01, 2003 13:42 CST
Comment/Review:
Much coolness..... I really liked this chapter.... was getting a little suspicious of Sess.... PLEASE WRITE MORE.....I need something to do during Finals study breaks!!!!!!..... Absolutley love the story line too!!!!
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Reviewed By: shinacira [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2003 18:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
dear, author i find this story really enjoyable, one of the best yet, very original, i am always waiting for your next update, it is really coming along great, you had a few mistakes on the terms of things at first, but that is okay no one is perfect, i hope to see more chapters ahead, keep up the good work. sincerly, Shinacira A.Galalnder of the sheikah tribe of shadows the gerdu tribe of theifs and the yagami clan
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Reviewed By: cursed_jax [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2003 14:53 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
all of those interruptions in the story were slightly annoying, but why did you have to end it there?! That is evil, how does Sesshomarou know about Kagome? awesome story so far, deffinitely a favorite of mine. although you it might be interesting to have inuyasha and kagome fight eventually. Please update very, very, very soon. unfortunately you left off at a very good point of suspense. good luck with the rest.
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Reviewed By: Relix On: November 26, 2003 04:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
How long until next update? I can't wait...
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Reviewed By: Inu-baby4life [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2003 21:01 CST
Comment/Review:
I really love yur story plez write some more soon you have to finish!
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Reviewed By: maronus [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2003 19:05 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MORE!!MORE!!!PLZ UPDATE!!!!!(*RUNS AROUND LIKE THE LITTLE SHE IS*MUHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!) MORE!!!
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