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Reviewed By: Star Fire Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2006 16:13 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a good story. I hope you can update again real soon. I can't wait. Star Fire Kagome
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Reviewed By: docbevculver [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2005 00:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
After reading most of this story on FF.N, I decided to check your profile for other stories and was pleased to see that it was being updated more here then FF.N. I nearly jumped out of my chair when I saw there were more chapters here! I will still say the same thing here that I said on FF.N, well written and an enjoyment to read. I've truly enjoyed reading each and every chapter. I can't wait for the next update!!! :)
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Reviewed By: Shoomy2003 On: September 18, 2005 18:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have NO IDEA how ecstatic I was to find that you had posted more chapters to this on another website. I just about cried tears of joy when I saw that it said 16 chapters. But, those tears were in vain, since there were only 13 of those gorgeously written chapters I had to sip from. Real life sucks. Don't you just wish you could slip out of reality to finish this story? Lord knows I do. Oh well. I hope the best for you right now and thanks for writing such a GREAT story with a seemingly original plot.
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Reviewed By: Saori Kyubei On: July 24, 2005 22:17 CDT
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Oh my goodness! -uberlow bow- I LOVE YOU! I ADORE YOU! You made an S/k Pairing and Sesshoumaru isn't ridiculously out of character! Praise on you FOREVAR! I did notice one thing though, Shippo seems to have conviently dissappeared. I miss him. *sniffle*
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Reviewed By: koutaishihi no kita On: July 01, 2005 01:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please continue writing, this story intrigues me to no end. I do wish to learn what happens to all of them, especially the adorable fluffy-sama. *sighs* If only; if only.
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Reviewed By: wing_hai [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2005 02:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello! Hello!? Are you in there?! Is the rest of the story in there with you?! If so, please come out. I've waited nearly two years for your next update... Now really. I doubt that's fair.
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Title: WOO!
Reviewed By: Jyurian Itsuki [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2005 21:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Overdone? Yeah, right!! This was incredible! I loved the descriptions, and the style of your writing was fantastic. ^--^ I'm off to read more, now!
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Title: hey
Reviewed By: InuyashsGurl4eva [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2005 19:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey there! What happened!?!?! I notice u havent updated in over year! PLEASE UPDATE YOUR STORIES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: You gonna write a book?
Reviewed By: Cobalt_gaze [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2005 22:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
holy sh@#!!! Please tell me u write books dude! i would realy like 2 purchase 1. One of the best storys i ever read. I just dont know what 2 say...damnit! I can see you havn't updated 4 a while now, so please do! I was wonderin if that had somthin 2 do with mediaminer movin & all. thank you! thank you! thank you!
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Reviewed By: karaboo On: October 20, 2004 21:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your fanfic but i would never have read it if i had known you hadn't updated in a year. i hope you haven't forgotten about your story or have decided to stop writing.
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Reviewed By: icelight On: October 20, 2004 15:31 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
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this story is awesome, and the emotional descriptions are juicy, but are you ever going to update? its been almost a year
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Reviewed By: Jasmine Fields [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2004 07:52 CDT
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I couldn't get enough of this story......:-) It's been - what - 9 months? I hope you're feeling better! Update, update!
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Reviewed By: sweetness427 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2004 23:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
good story...it would be even better if you would UPDATE!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: InuBaby500 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2004 07:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Write more or i will come over there and chooke you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
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Reviewed By: InuBaby500 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2004 07:04 CDT
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Write more or i will kill you!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: jink On: June 18, 2004 00:32 CDT
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good grief, are you ever going to update? i was starting to get into this story but there's no new chappies! please write more!
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Reviewed By: firefalcon On: June 02, 2004 10:52 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very interesting and original! I love the Sess/Kag pairing, and the way you've done it is, well, not like the overdone Inuyasha betrays, Kagome leaves, Sesshoumaru saves plot. I know that may not seem to make any sense, but you know what I mean. But could you do me this teensy weensy favor and, well, UPDATE??? I mean, it's been about half a year now, so you'd think you would have gotten over wny writer's block you might've had! ... Well, other than that little waiting problem, his is a great fic, so KEEP WRITING IT!!!
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Reviewed By: Miyumi [not logged in] On: May 23, 2004 20:44 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update soon!!! I'm dieing of suspense!!! So please be nice to your loyal readers and update!!! ~Miyumi
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Reviewed By: Zenkai On: May 15, 2004 23:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great fic, perhaps the best one I have ever read. I am an avid reader of fan fiction (all kinds) and I am especially fond of Kagome/Sesshomaru pairs. I applaude your excellent use of difficult words, and an engaging and involved plot that is not sex driven, but with still enough sexual tension to be very entertaining. I would have found your fan fic sooner, but I switch between this and another site and I have just recently come back to MM. P.S. Sessie interior monologue is super!
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Reviewed By: Broken_ Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2004 00:01 CDT
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um...i have a question...has this fic been discontinued or are you just writing a lot of other chapters and keeping us all in suspense....STOP IT..UPDATE..pllllzzzzzz,pplllzzzzz.*wines*
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Reviewed By: Kitten Paws On: May 06, 2004 18:04 CDT
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Please, please, please, please keep writing!!!! And fast!!! I want to keep reading! This is a wonderful story, I'm really, really enjoying it!
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Title: WHAT AN AWESOME FIC!!!!
Reviewed By: Swasdiva On: May 03, 2004 03:36 CDT
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I can't wait for the finale of this one, even though I'll be sad at its ending. What a fic!!!! Passion, excitement, and mystery. I LOVE this pairing and you have expertly tied them together. Please udpate soon!!!!
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Title: baka_juju2000
Reviewed By: baka_juju2000 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2004 22:20 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Me: I saw what your reply was to my earlier review, and I'm so sorry for what Sess has done to you. Sess:I have done no such thing. Me: I never said what you did, why are you being so definsive about??? Sess: nothing.... Me: (to Sess) You are such a horrible liar. (to author) Once again, I am sooooo sorry! To make it up to you, lets go eat sushi. (and leave Sess at home) Sess: Now you can't do that! I'm going and that's final! Me: (ZAP)*stupid flea boy. you will be sleeping on the couch tonight* And he won't be getting any cheesecake for a week. Sess: Hey that's not fair! You already took away my alcohol! ... Wait! Did you say I was gonna sleep on the couch? Me: Are you deaf? Yes. I took away the alcohol because... you tried to bite me. *gee, you're such a sore loser when it comes to drag racing*... Sess: *bitch* Me: Damn straight! And that's Miss Bitch to you! (to author) So anyway how 'bout that sushi??? Sess: You're really going to leave me hear? Me: Maybe if you're good, I bring you some chicken crunch rolls.
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: SailorWashu15 On: May 02, 2004 03:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY! I read your story and now I'm addicted, it only saddend me that you last updated a while back. A long while back. I hope you didn't abandon this 'cause its really very so good! *sheepish grin* Grammer problem I know! N/E ways plz plz plz plz update soon! These are the fanfics that make us amatur writers keep up hope. This has quickly become one of my favorite stories of all time! (chibi SailorWashu throwing confetti in background) And I would hate for it not to be compleated! So I ask you on my lovely writer goddess to update soon. OK I've ranted enough. Now for the threats *cracks knuckles* if you don't update soon I will "borrow" Everyone's wardrobe except Kikyo's, forcing everyone to wear Kikyo's 50 year old miko costume.(hey what can I say ^_^; I'm desperate) Also will infect your house with a plaugue of Naraku's wasps (which I hear are nearly impossible to get rid of without the tetsusaiga or a flea bomb)Ok so update please with sugar on top. SaiorWashu
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Reviewed By: blooded blade On: April 15, 2004 21:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GOD do I LOVE this story!! I finally got the time to sit back and have some quality time with my computer and of course, fan fics. I started reading yours and I couldn't stop! It's so WONDERFUL!! I LOVE IT!! Your an awsome writer with amazing talent and I envy every inch of your being! *bows in aww* Please update soon cause I noticed a little space between the last time you've updated and todays date ^_~ If you get what I mean. Well I must be going. Need to get some sleep... *hands cookies, cake, brownies, other fatining sweets with more sugar than necessary to author* And please except my lowly gift! ^^
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Title: AAAAWESOMME`
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2004 12:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome story. Update soon. Keep the fic going. Can't wait to see what Sesshomaru does to Naraku for what he did to Kagome.
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Reviewed By: koiangel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2004 22:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE UPDATE!!! PLEASE!! I love this story and want to know what happens!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!
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Reviewed By: LoupeyLady [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2004 22:48 CST
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This is great... but PLEASE finish it!!!
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Title: Where ish you...? O.o;
Reviewed By: Anonymous!!!! On: March 18, 2004 02:55 CST
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I, along with alot of your other readers, want to see what happens!! Tell us what's going on or something!! The dancing Kirby is out to get you...
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Title: Where ish you...? O.o;
Reviewed By: Anonymous!! On: March 18, 2004 02:53 CST
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I, along with alot of your other readers, want to see what happens!! Tell us what's going on or something!! The dancing Kirby is out to get you...>.>
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