| "Yume" Reviews/Comments [ 153 ] |
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Reviewed By: river [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2003 15:19 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Enjoyng your fic...appreciate the time you put aside to write it!!! I know it can be hard.
And yay for Sess/Kag pairings!!! |
Reviewed By: karen in ct On: September 08, 2003 05:15 CDT
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I have got to tell you some of the descriptions are REALLY getting to me. The bit about silk sounding like a knife on bone...that's going to stick in my head all day.
Karen |
Reviewed By: Lady Sesshoumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2003 10:46 CDT
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Hey, that is an EXCELLENT reason not to execute the guy. Shigure...K...Crawford... *drools over voice*
I thought that having Naraku believe Kagome healed Inuyasha was great...actually, I loved the entire bit with him trying to figure out exactly what was going on. And Inuyasha picking up on the fact that Kagome KNEW Sesshoumaru was the other man in her dream...very nice indeed ^^ I almost feel sorry for him. Almost.
As far as ff.net goes, what I think has happened is that people have been reporting abuse on R rated fics that go beyond R ratings. I'm on lists where people have said that they received emails because their summary said "lemon." Any truth to it? Who knows. If people didn't abuse the rating system, things would be okay. Of course, if ff.net hadn't taken away NC-17 (which was their right) then people wouldn't incorrectly rate their fics. Ah well. I might have to go back and re-edit some of my stuff, make it a bit cleaner (Leviathan, Silent Scream). I might not bother *laughs*
*giggles more at Inuyasha's upset over Kagome's dreams*
*chants* K, Shigure, Crawford, K, Shigure, Craford... *sighs* Now you've disrupted my mind and I'll have to change my Weiss DVD (which I was watching in English for the first time haha) over to the Japanese language track just so I can hear the guy's voice ^^ Only then can I continue to function for the day *grins*
I bet this will be a big jumble as usual, since the formatting seems off and my breaks never show up! |
Title: I'm South Beach Gir ^_^l
Reviewed By: Sesshoumaru_Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2003 10:01 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YEah, this update is fast enough. ^_^ And thanks for explaning.^_^ Thank you. Update soon! |
Title: question?
Reviewed By: South Beach Girl On: September 05, 2003 13:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, Some parts were confusing, thankfully i understood the dream sequensess, even if it took me a while to recognise which were the dream and which were real. But, i liked the story. But i don'y understand why it says it's completed. It isn't complete, Sesshie and Kagome still have to get the last shard, they still have to get together. And Naraku ahs to be killed. PLease tell me you are updating this soon. |
Title: yume
Reviewed By: whit On: September 03, 2003 15:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow this is a great fic. I cant wait for you to put up the next chapter let alone finish it!!!!!!!
Great job |
Reviewed By: Sesshyangel On: September 03, 2003 11:01 CDT
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q(@.@)p Why does it have two different chapter numbers? Its confusing. Anyways. Hehe. He's powerless when it comes to Kagome and Rin, eh? The big softie! (sigh. what i wouldn't give for a life size plushie of sesshou right now.) Oh love how you use so many sophisticated words. i learn new words while reading. Of course that means constantly opening up the dictionary that weighs a ton, but its all good. q(^.^)p |
Reviewed By: Lady Sesshoumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2003 09:58 CDT
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Hearing you say you wish you could write more like me is a great compliment to me, considering how much I love your style! ^^
I've already fallen victim to the story removals of ff.net, but that was last year when they took down the NC-17 pieces. It was my most reviewed fic ever at almost 100 reviews, too *sighs* I try to edit down my fics for ff.net, but I still have a few that are only found here and at aff.net.
Now, on to the actual review! Sesshoumaru is turning into a softy! He couldn't even strike down the lowly demon after he was finished with him! I like the way this is going...Sesshoumaru finally has his dream woman, even though he isn't quite sure what to do with her yet *grins* Those darn humans have a knack for pulling him around on a string, it seems ^^ |
Reviewed By: Ithilelda On: August 30, 2003 20:06 CDT
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Love chaps nine and ten. keep posting please. I'm getting kinda addicted. |
Reviewed By: karen in ct On: December 31, 1969 18:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It took me a while to warm up to your fic but something just kept me reading....
The later chapters have been very enjoyable and I really don't want to say stimulating but I must.
Did I read that you have children?? Good grief, they give you time to put two thoughts together in a row? Hurray for you!
Since school is starting I hope you will have more time to write. |
Reviewed By: Sundragon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 1969 18:00 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the story. The jewel feeding off the tetsiga (spelling?) is very interesting and orginal. Great dreams! Love the detail! I'm not that good at detail. *crys but setles down after a while) Update soon! I want to know when Kagome an Fluffy get together. PLEASE!
Ja Ne |
Reviewed By: Lady Sesshoumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 1969 18:00 CST
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Great updates, well worth the wait...too bad I didn't think to check for your fics at ff.net *laughs* Of course, now that I have, I added you to my favorite authors list ^^
I love your descriptive writing...THAT is how I want to write! That is something I absolutely LOVE to see in fics, and it seems that yours only gets better as the story progresses! |
Reviewed By: Lady Sesshoumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2003 21:37 CDT
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Chapter Five, another great chapter ^^ I loved the inner thoughts of Sesshoumaru...poor guy, having to deal with the possibility of feeling *whispers so he can't hear* love. |
Reviewed By: Flambeau-Willow On: August 02, 2003 12:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is really nice!! The plot is not only intriguing...it is masterfully planned. Please update soon, ne? |
Reviewed By: Tom On: August 01, 2003 06:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You the Man build the Suspense |
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